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    Tryumph
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    Why?

    Yo, this is my first post so slam a muthafucka and get me droppin hot ish.


    Why

    Why do i express feelings of a lost quest?
    Why do i evolved into a character that wont accept less?
    Why do i love hip hop? freedom of speach indulges in itself.
    Why do i get treated like im the only one who needs help?
    Why and what happened with infatuated evils?
    Why look at the past instead of lookin for meals?
    Why toke on that herb that got me stick and why do i need to know why?
    Why is life contemplated by so many out there and why, do i always seem to care?
    Why ask why when God repents sins when you die?

    Knowledge of the universe is swerved with curves that control how the answer nerves/
    obsurd thoughts in and out of control, tired of asking why but i need to know/
    way back at the age of like ten, i questioned the fact that men pretend/
    They tell lies of history and what it meant to me was actually developing a thought/
    Questions and answers are lies a lot/ Just Watch, It only took one minute to prove/ There was a boy on the ground gettin snuck for his shoes/
    I had to walk over and asked the men why/
    They only way the could answer was there finger to the sky/
    Saying i knew nothin the next night when questioned/
    cause i feel those men were out to teach a lesson/
    of the not blessed, sure i wasnt intrigued by the violence i seen/
    seemed obscene actually, i grew up in poverty too/
    but people in this world do wat they gotta do/
    but arent true,so many sinful ways its scary/
    what happens when we sin too much we're burried/
    by the wrath of an utmost power in this Earth/
    Riots in every town, flames shoot up from the dirt/
    Dont believe in theories of relgious beliefs?/
    Do you believe in the power of our own fleets?/
    Evil passions emassed in ones ego clashed in with massive attacks with idiotic clacks of gunfire/
    equal opportunities destroyed by big headed power hungry,
    tower equals money, reckless, ruthless, empty conscious desire/
    Hell on Earth is bizerk enough for me to work it up/
    Speak of the days sins get washed away by "Tsunami Duds"/
    under any circumstance do i chance the advance in my stance on legalizing plants and chants of fuck Bush reign through the entire nation/Of course i believe in our sweet America but not with Bush runnin the station/
    Idiots , who in their right mind wanted Bush's right mind up when he cant even open his eyes/
    to see lies all over his ties that terrorized our enterprise/
    so many intices and knots get sliced to try and not provoke an army of civilians to choke the Governments throat/
    I hope i enrolled for that draft, too damn bad our country asks us last/
    How fast did we attack crack? compare that to toppling Iraq/
    D.A.R.E. Hah, Drugs Actually Repay Expenses/
    How Extensive can a fine line be?/
    How expensive can a white line be?
    and exchange your pain for a day with any of us!/
    You would run and hide, IN GOD WE TRUST/

    Got more comin just atleast drop a line, tear into me if you gotsto imma bring the Rockies up. Hatetown stomped the rest the midwest, One luv to Epidemik Sccriptz..if ya still read this ish this ya boy kwaba




    Got more comin just atleast drop a line, tear into me if you gotsto imma bring the Rockies up. Hatetown stomped the rest the midwest, One luv to Epidemik Sccriptz..if ya still read this ish this ya boy kwaba

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    Tryumph
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    Up...Where the fuck people at, aint no one known so ya ignore fuckin birds

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    yo this was well composed well structured well thought out and delivered in a manner that demands a response.im sorry peeps sleep on your work but that happens here trust me i know but know your skills are there and the few that notice will appreciate what you did on this.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    it was good homie, i was feelin the flow and everytthing else it was a godd writiin piece and the vocab was awesome, and believe i kno no body readz my shit ethir

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    lol this was a long piece kept me reading,

    You came well in this the vocab was well put together, your lines in some places got a lil long for me then short so the structure could of been upped a lil but apart from that nice piece homs, keep at it
    written voices makes hidden noises

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    i felt this shit man, well organized and everything, good flow. i understand the whole concept and everything. good structure. good drop 7/10

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics you've left decent feedback on or this will be closed. Read the thread at the top of the forum if you don't know how.

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    sexylilmama_69
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    looks good

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