10 lines
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House Rules
10 lines
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House Rules
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how u defining ill when ya sick and congested
till ma punches bested...beat da snot out ya chest bitch!
ya shitty verse aint hot......I already know wat u'll drop
shitting out rhymes in a pot...and putting em on stove tops!
fag want something to slide down ya throat..yea i'll let it
when my lyrics spraying str8 in it like chloraseptic!
19 yrs. old to battle me and soon will regret it
jus like ya credit....u should of never accepted!
ya flow is hot n goes whereva da wind blows
da time dat happens is when da sun snows!
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Why you aiming B? I'll show this fake a real piece
And fuck what the thread shows
_____________You aint on the same page as me
He can't handle me I know I'm a hard act to follow
And I didn't know that homos spit
________________I thought they just swallowed
Dude guaranteed to fuck'n suck but shit,that ain't even news
Stomped up and down so bad,ya basically 'breathing shoes'
Don't blame my verse that leaves ya body confusin' the doctors
i lay tracks..the only tracks u lay is in the back of ya boxers
this kid's fucked like a bachelor engaged, he asked for it
shits expensive nowadays
lil boy had to break his piggy bank ta get 'gassed' for it
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Ill- You had some good creativity here...This was backed with good flow and structure was kinda meh...but ok..._______<<that shit aint workin...lol, And your personals seemed kinda...UN-Personal...That breathing shoes line was the only one I really liked...you need to keep it up tho...Good job...
Ak-Mixa-This was one of your better verses....That credit line was dope...loved that fresh flavor and creativity...you need to fix your structure up a bit...line your lines up...And flow was nice...your opener was kinda dumb and didn't rhyme really...unless you read it very quickly...then it fits...this was a fast beat sort of rap...Your personals (When you used them) came harder overall and hit a litte better than his.
V/ Goes to Ak...No hate Ill...I'm in ya crew but I think he did the job here...You both made this a close battle but in a way it was really weak aswell...not much creativity...you both had one line that was creative really...the rest of your lines were just fillers and didn't pack a punch...good battle...Peace, HONEST VOTING PROSPERS.
~NaSh
Ak Mixa - Wtf? I've never seen you drop such weakness before. C'mon man, I know your better than that. You know me fam and we been here for a while and we both know you can do better. Your punches were just weak. Your lines were soo short... Just weak fam.
Ill - Real dope. I was feeling the whole verse. The punches and personals were just all there. The structure was dope. Good shit. Keep it up.
Vote/ Ill. Usive.
Get at the siggy niggas!
ak merkd..way betta punches and flow.... this otha fool sounded like B-RAD from malibus most wanted...
i lay tracks..the only tracks u lay is in the back of ya boxers
""shrink shrink makin me think, think i'm ganna go ta ma sink and vomet. clean it up wit comet. earths my plonet""" ak be nice, hes a white boi gosh donnit..
this was easy
v///ak
:Justified Colorado Soliders:
My names Boo.
The shit i speak is tru.
My bloods Spilled and
I have spilled blood
Lil niggas. Get out these streets, and away from drama
You aint doin nothin, but killin ya mama
uppin........................................fa mo votes homie
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Ill- You had some good creativity here...This was backed with good flow and structure was kinda meh...but ok..._______<<that shit aint workin...lol, And your personals seemed kinda...UN-Personal...That breathing shoes line was the only one I really liked...you need to keep it up tho...Good job...
Ak-Mixa-This was one of your better verses....That credit line was dope...loved that fresh flavor and creativity...you need to fix your structure up a bit...line your lines up...And flow was nice...your opener was kinda dumb and didn't rhyme really...unless you read it very quickly...then it fits...this was a fast beat sort of rap...Your personals (When you used them) came harder overall and hit a litte better than his.
V/ Goes to Ak...No hate Ill... but I think he did the job here...You both made this a close battle but in a way it was really weak aswell...not much creativity...you both had one line that was creative really...the rest of your lines were just fillers and didn't pack a punch...good battle...Peace, HONEST VOTING
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