Explicit_OT VS CHAINBLADE

[Hennessy.]

iight 10-12 lines
no crew votes hate or dickridin shit
votes must b explained.
drop 30 minutes after check
check due asap
bring heat

[CHAINBLADE]

checkin........................................... .......

[Hennessy.]

check

[CHAINBLADE]

listen homie u about ta get murdered bad
ill put more red dots on head then you'll get from target bags
dis man stays in da closet no chicks goes wit him
so he have no choice but to jerk on his dick
he starts to battle an keep gettin merk quick
man fuck u ill jus stick da mic in his mount
now fagot u could take it an jus wip it about
now show every one here wat u like in ur house
tell me guest this kid just stack up on porn yo
ask him how to men fuck i bet he would know

[CHAINBLADE]

i could bet u be stripin in clubs
no doute bout that he loves stokein on that dick cuz
he was abused at a young age O WELL

[Hennessy.]

this is the new age chainsaw massacre..n we far from texas
explicit hits so hard leave u scared n defenceless
chainblade aint shit, nah..he could never b sharp
he's soft in hearrt therefor he'll never b hard
look at his avy..he's lookin a little bit lonely
chainblades a telemarketer.. he's a little bit phone-y
i been readin ya rhymez...ya shotz are not bad for a new guy
jackin off on top of the C.N is the only way he's shoots high (C.N. is a huge tower for anyone who dont know)
you little to me son..so im steppin on you n leavin
your losses are a chainreaction, but ur wackness is leakin

[lilvndbigd]

yo good shit now explicitot come in our battle i spit already :insane:

[CHAINBLADE]

iight homeslice c where this shit goes...................

[Hennessy.]

up'n

[CHAINBLADE]

yeah ok

[lilvndbigd]

yo explicitot won this one but i cant vote i need 100 posts but

[I Got Pwnd]

CHAINBLADE breakdown...

listen homie u about ta get murdered bad
ill put more red dots on head then you'll get from target bags
This was a aiight punch,I like tha wordplay alil...but it is sorta played,but u used it diff...6.5/10

dis man stays in da closet no chicks goes wit him
so he have no choice but to jerk on his dick
No!...This was no need'd..fake personals are played...an didnt rhyme..1/10


he starts to battle an keep gettin merk quick
man fuck u ill jus stick da mic in his mount
now fagot u could take it an jus wip it about
oh..I see how ur writing ur shit now...you skipp'd a line tho'....This was simple an 2 basic...but ill give you a 4.5..tah make up on tha other point.

now show every one here wat u like in ur house
tell me guest this kid just stack up on porn yo
ask him how to men fuck i bet he would know
Stretched...an played....not really effective at all..bad closer...2/10

overall kid elv8 on being more creative with ur punches..this was average for a battle drop...I'll give you 4.7/10

explicitot break down

this is the new age chainsaw massacre..n we far from texas
explicit hits so hard leave u scared n defenceless
Didnt rhyme 1st of all...Texas~Defense-less...Not even close...Not a good punch either..I aint feeling this..it was awfull..but tha 1st line was good if you would ended it right...1/10


chainblade aint shit, nah..he could never b sharp
he's soft in hearrt therefor he'll never b hard
Dudnt rhyme well at all...had a lil multi almost tho.....a lil name play...4/10

look at his avy..he's lookin a little bit lonely
chainblades a telemarketer.. he's a little bit phone-y
Hah!...best bar thus far in tha whole battle..nice punch an personal combo...8/10

i been readin ya rhymez...ya shotz are not bad for a new guy
jackin off on top of the C.N is the only way he's shoots high (C.N. is a huge tower for anyone who dont know)
almost a good punch but failed with landing it.....but it was str8...average at best...5/10

you little to me son..so im steppin on you n leavin
your losses are a chainreaction, but ur wackness is leakin
Coo closer...couldve been better,wordplay,multi,an structure..but coo..5.5/10

Overall....you had sum bad wording...aigght structure,but a couple punches saved you...I give you a 5.5/10



"E" gets this cuz he had a couple of good punches,tight but average battle...keep elev8ing...But I cant vote yet,so Im leaving feed back...hopefully sum1 will see it an be thankfull..Hah!

[Hennessy.]

uppin

[King Humble]

chain blade had an ass structure, str8 flow, no punches
Ext u had a better verse overall, flow, punches, structure

v/EX

[MagicConcept]

listen homie u about ta get murdered bad
ill put more red dots on head then you'll get from target bags
good start***
dis man stays in da closet no chicks goes wit him
so he have no choice but to jerk on his dick
he starts to battle an keep gettin merk quick
ok**
man fuck u ill jus stick da mic in his mount
now fagot u could take it an jus wip it about
noooo*****
now show every one here wat u like in ur house
tell me guest this kid just stack up on porn yo
ask him how to men fuck i bet he would know
bad finish

str8 flow, str8 punches, struc was bad 6/10
__________________

this is the new age chainsaw massacre..n we far from texas
explicit hits so hard leave u scared n defenceless
better start***********
chainblade aint shit, nah..he could never b sharp
he's soft in hearrt therefor he'll never b hard
good
look at his avy..he's lookin a little bit lonely
chainblades a telemarketer.. he's a little bit phone-y
niceeeeeeeeee********* killer
i been readin ya rhymez...ya shotz are not bad for a new guy
jackin off on top of the C.N is the only way he's shoots high (C.N. is a huge tower for anyone who dont know)
ok*********
you little to me son..so im steppin on you n leavin
your losses are a chainreaction, but ur wackness is leakin
better finish********

better verse, nice flow, punches, wordplay. good shit
8/10
44 Minutes Ago 08:32 AM