Fuck What You Heard

[warchild]

Im an anti social asshole so im not Closer To My Peers
Im more demented than R Kelly still jerking off to Posters Of Aaliyah
Aborted babies adorn all four Walls Of My House
I picture Mother Theresa when im Balling My Spouse
Then i turn into Hannibal and bite her Clit Off
Then fist her ass with a barb wire Wrist Watch
I abuse mad drugs, right now im Tripping With God
I told my girl i was sensitive, yeah on the Tip Of My Knob
Im dead broke so i let Michael Jackson Rape My Son
What? he said he'd give me a million now the Papers Come
Im such a nice guy when i die my destination is Likely Heaven
Fuck that im a thug i hold more weight than Missy in Ninety Seven
Im a psychotic preacher so whatever i say my Sermon Stands
Me and authority figures get along like DMX and his German Fans
Now shut the fuck up and let the Chorus Stutter
Now im out like that bitch C. DeLores Tucker

Im the sickest bastard around fuck what You Heard
You talk shit literally i just forced fed you Two Terds
If your into drugs give me two fucking Thumbs Up
If your a thug give me two Fucking Guns Up

I just saw my neighbour shooting up he goes through the Day Stressed
My rhymes and outlook on life is more negative than a virgins Aids Test
Let me stay at your house you'll find your Cash Gone
Im the type to rape Cherie with a Tony Blair Mask On
I wanna do a good deed so i can go to heaven and Battle God
Murder every metaphor he musters then kill him with a Cattle Prod
The place that im from motherfucker We Stab Gays
Ive had more court apperances than Whitneys had Rehab Stays
Im embarassed for you slip me a grand i'll write your Next Release
Then i'll steal all your royalties while you Rest In Peace
Oh you really want me to Ghost Write No Brother
Im real hip hop i write Quotes Like No Other
Rhyme Sceme, Maybe Class, But Dope Aint A Friend
Time Seems, Crazy Fast, Cut Folks With A Pen
I evolve evidently faster than the Rest Of You Average Cats
Im the one so you pricks cant even Detest Even Two Savage Raps

[Harmon]

Im an anti social asshole so im not Closer To My Peers
Im more demented than R Kelly still jerking off to Posters Of Aaliyah
-hahaha i love this fuckin line-

Aborted babies adorn all four Walls Of My House
I picture Mother Theresa when im Balling My Spouse
-hahahahaha this is genius-

Then i turn into Hannibal and bite her Clit Off
Then fist her ass with a barb wire Wrist Watch
-i said G-Damn do you ever stop the madness-

I abuse mad drugs, right now im Tripping With God
I told my girl i was sensitive, yeah on the Tip Of My Knob
-im gonna stop quotin lines cause your having to many to quote on this piece-

Im such a nice guy when i die my destination is Likely Heaven
Fuck that im a thug i hold more weight than Missy in Ninety Seven
-OMG you needa quit that....lol great line!-

Im a psychotic preacher so whatever i say my Sermon Stands
Me and authority figures get along like DMX and his German Fans
Now shut the fuck up and let the Chorus Stutter
Now im out like that bitch C. DeLores Tucker

Im the sickest bastard around fuck what You Heard
You talk shit literally i just forced fed you Two Terds
If your into drugs give me two fucking Thumbs Up
If your a thug give me two Fucking Guns Up

I just saw my neighbour shooting up he goes through the Day Stressed
My rhymes and outlook on life is more negative than a virgins Aids Test
Let me stay at your house you'll find your Cash Gone
Im the type to rape Cherie with a Tony Blair Mask On
I wanna do a good deed so i can go to heaven and Battle God
Murder every metaphor he musters then kill him with a Cattle Prod
The place that im from motherfucker We Stab Gays
Ive had more court apperances than Whitneys had Rehab Stays
Im embarassed for you slip me a grand i'll write your Next Release
Then i'll steal all your royalties while you Rest In Peace
Oh you really want me to Ghost Write No Brother
Im real hip hop i write Quotes Like No Other
Rhyme Sceme, Maybe Class, But Dope Aint A Friend
Time Seems, Crazy Fast, Cut Folks With A Pen
I evolve evidently faster than the Rest Of You Average Cats
Im the one so you pricks cant even Detest Even Two Savage Raps

look man this piece is a fuckin classic...i couldnt quote no more lines cause almost every line i read i was loosin my shit to....great great great piece...im lookin forward to reading more of your stuff man

[c0rrupt]

Let me stay at your house you'll find your Cash Gone
Im the type to rape Cherie with a Tony Blair Mask On
hahahaha!


I'm wettin myself!

This is really really good shit, keep it up!

c0rrupt

[SyCo_187]

This Is Some Freaky Ass Shit To Be Writin About
But U Had Good Everything In Overall Nice Drop

7.9/10

[Mackin']

that was pretty demented.. lol.. nice piece.. it showed your true self, no matter how weird that may be.. jk.. structure was nice, flow was nice, there were not many multi's, but the metaphors were nice. this was all around pretty nice piece, ide say 8.5/10

[warchild]

Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=242854
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=242235

[warchild]

Appreciate the feed, logging off now so im uppin this.

[warchild]

Ive had 33 views of this piece and 3 replies come on people ive replied to 13 other Om's i want some feed on this, uppin.

[Dat]

This has some pretty nice wording lol.

Liking the fact that your OMs recently are based on just randomly bein witty, but i suppose its one of the rare good ways to self-glorify

On a real, nice piece. Some of your concepts got a bit predictable, in the sense that i could work out the next few lines because you had used the scheme earlier, but im only saying that because its the only thing i can criticise.

Dope drop, keep em comin - and most of all, keep em original!

[Brandon Heat]

this was pretty slick... I'm impressed... one of the better drops... just a few things I think you can do better on... but... good job...

[Dablesser]

good shit b

[1up]

good vocab, and flow was good, structure was aight. Try to get your lines to match up a little closer on the syllable tip.

Shit was a lil' fucked up tho....lol

o yea, and wordplay was off the hook...more multi's woulda been nice tho.

o, and if anyone could check out any of the battles in my sig, I'd appreciate it.

one.

[warchild]

Appreciate the feed, i replied to 13 Oms yesterday so how about a bit more feed on this.

[EyeBite]

i loved the multies in this, very impressive.....rhymes were incredible....i see you are very exprecienced at rappin and i can tell, the flo was smooth and strucutre was good
topic was cool, i liked it...nicely done an, good drop..keep it up....peace...............

[warchild]

Appreciate the feed, these were pretty much on the spot punches and metaphors i havent sat down and really came up with really dope shit for a while this is me at an average level when i actually sit down and create my punches cant be touched but its hard to actually find time to really take time with writing when you work shifts but i'll be working on new shit soon. I thought some of the punches in this were tight but i can do a lot better but its nice to see people appreciate what i write, peace.