nice shit man, nice nice shit.
I am totally feelin the love for pac come outta that, nigga thats great.
Good structure, great flow, great rhymes, good vocab, nice use of multis that was tight, good wordplay, you layed out the words deeply. Felt the emotion for pac and his music flow outta that, dat was some tight shit man. O ya he was killed by 4 shots....good shit though 8.8/10. keep da love for the greatest flowin...
ill man real ill i feel the same way
this was really good, topic seemed very popular and i wasnt really feelin it, i've seen like 20 of these types but this one had acually good rhymes, and good vocab, flow was smooth and strcuutre was even, nicely done, just choose different topics next time,, peace
cinna it was tight my nigga ur flow was hot and u captured me into the moment i wanted to read the whole thing my nigga gd shit
good pice, strong vocab, and good flow
just dont try and rhyme with the same thign for more than 5 lines
makes it look nobbish, but otherwise good piece, apart from the played out topic
I'm not from the west, but I really felt that, you had nice creativity, good concept. It was a nice!!!!! Drop
I give that piece
10/10
Ok...it was good. Obviously a lot of people have done Pac dedications...and this was yours. You had good structure and vocab...except I personally didn't like the one sound rhymin throughout the whole thing. I enjoyed man...it wasn't horrible and had good feelin to it. keep flowin man.
-Play-Boy
The Optimist
Nice piece I respect it .You showed that u knew what ur talkin about. I know im not the first one to write it but i needed to know how it inspired you
uppin
this was really good,topic was real cool man and i was really feelin it, i like your style this had sum great rhymes and great vocab, , flow was smooth and strcuutre was even, nicely done, just choose different topics next time,, peace and return the feed on ym new drop...night mares, thanks.
uppin
the topic is a commonly used topic.. but i think ur had a nice flow on this, and i can see Pac is one of you idols.. good job
uppin 3
uppin 4 timez man i still need feedback
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