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LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
Rbs 1st Text Tourney Champ
LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
Rbs 1st Battle In Legends Forum
Rbs 1st 1-2 Punch Champ
Member of A.I.
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Last edited by Jacent.; October 21st, 2005 at 05:52 PM
heres 28 for ya so...
sit back, this is what happens when i write legit things
but whens the last time u seen feeble in a battle, NOT crying & bitching
& thats truth, i hit little faggots, keep ya jaw ready
cause if I Mark'd my words...hold up, you probably went out w/ him already
i aint gon bother this blind queen, u needa honor these lines b
so dont take it to heart, when i say i fathered ya rhyme scheme
been hot at this text shit forever, wanna see a bleedin vet?
the fuck you supposed to be a legend..
WHEN YOU AINT WON A SEASON YET
yet he still acts black, man this guy ruins shit
last time we seen feeble with a semi, he ended up losin it
u aint on that crew tip no more, still i hurt ya men
heard ya girl in ocean city wait...
didn't want to beat u w/ old personals again
SORRY, ya rep is just wack, in the past u fixed them
but now ya record so long, startin to look like that new numbering system
feeble's a bitch, see you's a hoe mayn
plus u hit us with so many wack lines, vylint EVEN quit cocaine
so that tells ya something, shit i'll slam in to ya biz
& make you quit rap, like fuckin ambience did
& yo, i almost quit text, but thank god, i'm glad too
cause ur 30 will be like ya father...
drunk, wack & outta his mind when he had you
ya past shit wasn't fire, i can finish this in two bars
ya verse last week proved how horrible of a battle you are
lmfao @ this jewish guy doin text, i dunno what hurts cuz
not to mention this week , nique pretty predicted how ya verse was
you not gon win, ive pretty much messed ur hope
you wrote 30 for nothing, not one of them will be fresh or dope
so just quit, you aint even old, go figure..
now i can pretty much quit text..
i went thru one verse w/o sayin the word "nigga"
Last edited by Jacent.; October 21st, 2005 at 05:51 PM
i feel bad to do this but
we know what'll happen, after this, tell em who you lost to again
your so wack, even Jesus is waiting for ya pentecost you the win
just ask him, not even he loves you & bitch im free from sinning
Im reliable.. battling you i can trustees will be the key to winning
as far as flow, ya Native heritage is the only thing im deeming savage
Jacents having a tantrum.. cant stop his style from screaming average
u can't match this.. when compared your shook & im steady
you cant even land a punch, cuz the white man took that already
go ahead & behead me, im disrespectful - but bitch im still merking
after this u can try ur heart out.. but i doubt it'll be still working
the fuck am i posting so late? listen; my reasons will not be resisted
if the league is like me at all, they pretty much forget he existed
plus im severing whores, you aint nothing, ya endeavors is tore
i'd personal jacent, but sadly, theres nothing I remember him for
persistant.. I keep coming doper, choke ya as a way of beginning
Your wack, psych.. (hah, dumbfuck thinks thats saying im kidding)
im not too cocky, but u drop me? the laughters hurting my bladder
this is personal matters.. jace prolly believes his personals matter
you have a big peepee...what?... who am i fooling your gay
it aint a coincidence that for Natives to bow is a tool of the trade
on that line of thinking, i've been told your nothing & your easy to take
i got lots to learn from ya, so what type of corn will u teach me to make?
your trying to be dope, but ya way of thinking is telling it wacker
u cant make up your mind.. which is too bad for your intelligence factor
get mad n' crushed, left distressed with a shattered clutch
& we all go by his word.. why stop when they don't matter much
i aint bad enuf to lose, supposedly theres newbies i take it u merk
go back to playing ball, thats the only way you can make it to first
sit back, this is what happens when i write legit things
but whens the last time u seen feeble in a battle, NOT crying & bitching
been hot at this text shit forever, wanna see a bleedin vet?
the fuck you supposed to be a legend..
WHEN YOU AINT WON A SEASON YET
vs
as far as flow, ya Native heritage is the only thing im deeming savage
Jacents having a tantrum.. cant stop his style from screaming average
u can't match this.. when compared your shook & im steady
you cant even land a punch, cuz the white man took that already
go ahead & behead me, im disrespectful - but bitch im still merking
after this u can try ur heart out.. but i doubt it'll be still working
the fuck am i posting so late? listen; my reasons will not be resisted
if the league is like me at all, they pretty much forget he existed
plus im severing whores, you aint nothing, ya endeavors is tore
i'd personal jacent, but sadly, theres nothing I remember him for
im not too cocky, but u drop me? the laughters hurting my bladder
this is personal matters.. jace prolly believes his personals matter
on that line of thinking, i've been told your nothing & your easy to take
i got lots to learn from ya, so what type of corn will u teach me to make?
get mad n' crushed, left distressed with a shattered clutch
& we all go by his word.. why stop when they don't matter much
i aint bad enuf to lose, supposedly theres newbies i take it u merk
go back to playing ball, thats the only way you can make it to first
god damn.
that personals matter shit was sooo true, lol. Brutal shit man. Feeble
ate the fuck outta this battle.
vote-Feeble
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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as far as flow, ya Native heritage is the only thing im deeming savage
Jacents having a tantrum.. cant stop his style from screaming average
u can't match this.. when compared your shook & im steady
you cant even land a punch, cuz the white man took that already
go ahead & behead me, im disrespectful - but bitch im still merking
after this u can try ur heart out.. but i doubt it'll be still working
the fuck am i posting so late? listen; my reasons will not be resisted
if the league is like me at all, they pretty much forget he existed
plus im severing whores, you aint nothing, ya endeavors is tore
i'd personal jacent, but sadly, theres nothing I remember him for
persistant.. I keep coming doper, choke ya as a way of beginning
Your wack, psych.. (hah, dumbfuck thinks thats saying im kidding)
im not too cocky, but u drop me? the laughters hurting my bladder
this is personal matters.. jace prolly believes his personals matter
you have a big peepee...what?... who am i fooling your gay
it aint a coincidence that for Natives to bow is a tool of the trade
vs.
been hot at this text shit forever, wanna see a bleedin vet?
the fuck you supposed to be a legend..
WHEN YOU AINT WON A SEASON YET
vote-Feebs
why? cus he came with some ill shit, while on the other hand jacent came with poorly worded played concepts
AI[/size]fuck you.
feeble definatly dropped fire this week, fuck he blazed it
BWAHAHHAHAHAH.
Feebs is definitly back.
Shit on a bun and call it roast beef yo.
That was doppe.
sorry for dissing your nativeness jacent
I couldn't resist tho lmao
no need in doing a huge breakdown on this..
bottom line, feebs took advantage of the time given this week and dropped fire
jacent came nice...agianst more than half the league that verse would have won
or at least got you more recognition...but when u compare it to feebs verse, its not even close...sorry jacent, feeble did his thing this week, and showed why he is still one of the top heads in the league..
as far as flow, ya Native heritage is the only thing im deeming savage
Jacents having a tantrum.. cant stop his style from screaming average
lmao...
should easily be in top punches..
v/feeble
Word, read it might as well vote now.
Basically Jace came decent and I thought we might win...
then I see Feeble beating his penis with a broomstick.
And that shit was dope.
Atleast 10 quotable bars in Feebs verse that would make the mag in any given week.
He basically just wrecked it.
Sorry Jace.
V/the jewish kid
lol when Jace said he was an indian I though he meant from India, lol, didn't realise he was native american, coo...what tribe?
Yea...Jace, u know I'll merk the peepee /w you any day of the week, but Feebs got this.
Jace actually came pretty nice though. Lots of blah lines, but also quite a few decent/good ones. I also gotta give props to Jace for dropping 30. But yea, Feebs came fucking DOPE in this batttle, and seems to be back to his former self. Shit was mad ill,lol. Verse of the week hands down.
/v Feebs
yea good shit
way too many indian disses that have been used against me so *shrugs*
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