12 lines 30 minuetes blind...you got that.....(after check in)
lets do this
good luck man
12 lines 30 minuetes blind...you got that.....(after check in)
lets do this
good luck man
iight check
check'in in.......
lets go.....
audio fix, huh? sounds like an addiction
but you got no skillz so ur punches r missin
i use basic lines...just to over come this herb..
he probably gonna drop some wack shit n re-post wit another verse
say you come from England, eh? well imma crush ya
you could tape a 100$ bill to ya dick n bitches wont touch ya
the point is..we rated by punches n structure
all of which you lackin so jus shut the fuk up-herb
thinkin you got a chance is like by a lottery ticket
a million in one, a shot you took....n missed it
this is, ya last battle battle cuz im leavin you fixed
so Noone will have to worry bout you ridin their diks
Ima cut you up n’ spit you out it’s about time I pounce violently
N trounce this seasame street thug n plug a slug into this wannabe
Effortsley confuse sin make him think he’s lost the winning touch
This automatic couldn’t hack it like I threw-up a clutch
He’s 19 n’ hasn’t seen an emcee like me rip holes in the tooth-less
I’m The lyrically roof-less--rip out ribs n prove who the best is
sin could only hurt me if he had 6 friends all of them deadly
And even that group…wouldn’t be dirty ima murk u easily
Newbie bitch challenging me like he thinks he’s the tits
Spittin’ pre-write’s aint gonna get you anywhere quick bitch
So quit spittin. He’s from nowhere..and they wont let you represent
This fuckers so poor….he snorts my shit…just to gain a scent
open for them votes,
good game sin,
lets get em' flowing
yeah what he said
..Fuck what you Thought..
ah fuk i did it again. iight im actually explicitot aka sin. yall happy now.
..Fuck what you Thought..
up'n
i couldnt pick a winner here after readin both yo verses twice so ima have 2 break it down like this...
Sin
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audio fix, huh? sounds like an addiction
but you got no skillz so ur punches r missin
*ok
i use basic lines...just to over come this herb..
he probably gonna drop some wack shit n re-post wit another verse
*ok
say you come from England, eh? well imma crush ya
you could tape a 100$ bill to ya dick n bitches wont touch ya
*better (this cud av bin good worded differently)
the point is..we rated by punches n structure
all of which you lackin so jus shut the fuk up-herb
*filler
thinkin you got a chance is like by a lottery ticket
a million in one, a shot you took....n missed it
*yea, better
this is, ya last battle battle cuz im leavin you fixed
so Noone will have to worry bout you ridin their diks
*ok
Sin, ur verse was alrite.Some ok punches. flow was ok. Some of ur lines tho cud have been betta than ok if u worded them different (just my opinion).
Like this one:
say you come from England, eh? well imma crush ya
you could tape a 100$ bill to ya dick n bitches wont touch ya
That coullda been good i thought worded differently.
vs
Audio
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Ima cut you up n’ spit you out it’s about time I pounce violently
N trounce this seasame street thug n plug a slug into this wannabe
*better opener
Effortsley confuse sin make him think he’s lost the winning touch
This automatic couldn’t hack it like I threw-up a clutch
*ok
He’s 19 n’ hasn’t seen an emcee like me rip holes in the tooth-less
I’m The lyrically roof-less--rip out ribs n prove who the best is
*ok
sin could only hurt me if he had 6 friends all of them deadly
And even that group…wouldn’t be dirty ima murk u easily
*weak
Newbie bitch challenging me like he thinks he’s the tits
Spittin’ pre-write’s aint gonna get you anywhere quick bitch
*ok
So quit spittin. He’s from nowhere..and they wont let you represent
This fuckers so poor….he snorts my shit…just to gain a scent
*good closer.
Your verse was aight too. Some ok punches.
Both had some punches that missed and some that hit.
Punches - tie
Wordplay - tie
Personals - none
Flow - sin
Was a close battle this pretty evened out but im gonna vote sin just coz i was feelin his verse more and it flowed 2 me more and i understood it.
No hate tho, its a hard one 2 judje a winner.
v/ sin
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Now thats a vote!pepps keep dat shit up.
up'n
..Fuck what you Thought..
shit im still in my alias. fuk this is confusing
..Fuck what you Thought..
well sin has this one he has better flwo and sturcture and harder punches but audiofix was still good he juss needs to work on his punches good battle
v//sin
up'n
wheres all the voters
..Fuck what you Thought..