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    Stalker

    Walkin down my street pitch black i could barely see
    i was taking big steps and spotted a shadow behind a tree
    i was starting to get suspicous i started walkin faster
    i put on my headphones and listened to the rap master
    i could still hear rustliing in the bushes behind me
    the shadow was chasing me now, i hid, he couldnt find me
    i was in a big batch of bushes and flowers, i was safe
    i fell asleep hours later and woke up very late..........
    water from a gardner spat on my head and woke me up
    i was confused how i got here my mind was fucked
    trying to remember, i ran home and called my friend
    the next night i was walkin home and i saw the shadow again


    I had a plan to catch the shadow stalin me every single night
    risky i was gonna get him away, i'm gonna put up a fight
    if it tries to get me i'll be ready to fight back real hard
    but if it gits me and i esacape, i'll need a body guard
    i was willing to catch the stalker that is so mysterious
    ready to risk my life i was gonna fight, i'm serious
    i walked down the street spotted the figure........
    i took out my gun and pulled the fuckin trigga
    it hit the shadow and it fell back and went owwww
    it was the evil raper, farmer thats fucked a cow
    i was rewarded with 500 dollars for catchin the man
    i wasn't gonna give up i was willin to take a stand

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    uppin this drop..............feed needed

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    Yeah i liked that nice flow keep going with that shit dog

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    Pretty dope peice...Could use a lot more multis and shit but it was pretty average...your subject was really basic and I expected all this inside the writing...The piece really put me in the position of this person...that's what OM's are suppose to do...Keep it up dude...nice dope flow and shit...you just need a bit more to fill it...other than that good job and keep it up....Be sure to comment me and Devastator on our OM...In my sig soon....Peace!

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    aiight thanks fir the feed..uppin fir sum more

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