10 lines
blind spit
due at 5 o clock cuz u got school
house rulez
check in whenever
jay one
Doom
10 lines
blind spit
due at 5 o clock cuz u got school
house rulez
check in whenever
i'm checkin in now. my verse should be in before 5:00.
Jay One
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man u lost 2 a rookie name Doom,
u lyrics are dirt so ima sweep'em up like a broom,
ur name is jay1 jus change it 2 jay lost,
cuz im harder 2 beat than video game boss.......
es, u bitch ass say u from the hood,
jus throw away ur rap book cuz ur raps are no good,
these are soft punches but hit harder than u ever would,
hittin u so strong got u changing ur religion,
would of hit u stronger but im like eddie griffin, "if i wasnt a christian",
cuz i would hit as hard as ur dad does wit his belt when u bitchin,
you fake, you phoney, i can crush any rhyme that you made homie
i bet you couldn't hit me with a punch if you threw kool-aid on me!
stop hatin........... i'm elevatin and that's what you want
you couldn't elevate if you was on a plane smokin a blunt
all those rhymes you got... in the trash is where you should keep it
you hidin ya wins... .................................................
......like you sellin lotion you bein victorious is a secret( victoria's secret)
i bet beating me is on ya wish list.......... for christ-mas
your PUNCHES, DONT HIT... your rhymes should be DISS-MISSED
throw your rhymes in the toilet cuz you know they iz-shit
if you was cotton and the voters was slaves you still wouldn't get picked
Jay One
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jay one definatley took dis...he had better punches, personals, and vocab...still need to elevate tho...need some better wordplay...DOOM ya verse was real shittie in dis battle...u really need to work on ya punches and better vocab...u didi ok tho but not good enough for da win yet...vote Jay
this was a 1 sided battle jay1 put this wack ass rapper in his place
wit gd punches wordplay and flow
doom lol man u need to just idk man just stop rappin and try something new cause this aint for u cuzz no hate
v/jay
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yo jay one toke this shit by far both were not that good but i have to give it to someone so it goes to jay for better punch lines and flow
LOL DOOM YOU SUCK!!!! damn man u need some major elevation... come on niigga wit the corny punches... u gotta come harder den that... im uppin dis for my nigga JAY WON!!! lol
Get it Jay won lol now im throwin corny punches lol uppin....
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uppin for my niggga Jay.................................my soldier killin out here..
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