What up dude? You good, aight, lets have a good battle!
10-25 lines
House Rules!!!
Meanin crew votes, hate votes, and d/r votes, you know.
check in, then drop bout an 1 later at the max.
You spit first.
That about it, drop a good spit for a nice battle.
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let me drop 2morrow cuz im in a battle now
cuz u responded 2 late my fault dog
Its all good......Just let me know when you ready, then PM me...good luck in ya otha battle.
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.....................check.....................g'l ......homie
Real through u should be dq for feeding,
ur excuse is "nah man im jus typin wat im reading",
my punches hit harder than Jeremiah Trotter,
got some many tricks up my sleeve call me a harlem globetrooter,
this cat 19 and doesnt know how 2 drive a car,
"bend u like beckham" show u a true wresting star,
ur RB career is not going 2 far,
got me spiting 10-25 lines when u dont deserve half a bar,
got ur self asking "who" are u like jae millz,
while i running u over like corey dill...........
on, jus give up cuz no1 is cheering u on, cuz u ugly and wack,
ull never get a girl cuz u got more wrinkles then my nut sack,
ppl call me jax the way i shake the ground,
ppl call u an amateur boxer the way u barely last round 2 round,
dog jus act like allan houston and retire,
cuz im the new franchise like channing frye,
call me the rock the way i taunt it,
cuz u as gangsta as the star of malibu's most wanted,
dog i already smokin u like a philly blunt,
pussy put u next 2 a mirror show u wat a cunt,
is,
i aint david spade but i jus showed u the biz,
ness bitch
gl dog go i know u here homie
*OPEN IT UP*
Face it titch, You wont win this ..
Your chances are slimmer than Kate Moss, after one of her coke binges.
Everything this guy drops is a failure ..
so I’m winning hand over fist, like we were playin Rock Scissors Paper.
This place is my home, you just barged in quick ..
think youre part of furniture here? Well thats cool - cos Im an arsonist.
All your bars are flipped, im the king of the castle ..
Total Murkage!? HA! Your crews named after what ima bring in this battle.
Now listen man, I aint tryin` to start ..
But you could win Rear Of The Year - cos you`ve got a face like an Arse!
*TIME FOR WHAT I DO*
I know why you call yaself King Cobra, cause u like 50, yall love them Snakes|
You know how it is when I battle, so you wanna prove that u got what it takes||
You a fag. fah certain wack, not on my level, I’ll thrash and hurt this little brat|
Exposing the BITCH in this King of Snake nigga when I drag the curtains back||
Like ya sexuality to ya mother,..... my verse is 2 much for ya Pride~To~Manage|
Like cooton stripz, I’ll put you inside a bandage you cant Survive~The~Damage||
And even if u was workin at Atkins Factory, you still wouldn’t have FAT~LINES|
So I’ma smash~u~casually n now n forever till death,haunt you like Past~Crimes||
N this aint just rips~n~spices I’m the nicest n u Tone Death like Broke Mic Devices|
This shit aint righteous, you cant beat me, but they let you battle me, and cant fight it||
When I’m done his boys’ll be like, he hasn’t been on since that day you scared him|
Shyt, you know how I do, well you dont, still, some one should have prepared him||
And like unsafe sex son, you’ll never on RB.com in a million years reach protection|
Cause I’m syntaxin my rhyme one at a time Real Thorough untill it reach profection||
Aight mane...I'm good......nice battle huh...sure....votes
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Oh, and no I aint go over the lines...I got like one more, thats 24, 12 bars...
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okay though real had a fucked structure & flow wasnt too good he nice punches to come with the rhymes was hot as well, cobra, your rhymes were okay but your punches were weak & U could have did better with flow because the flow, i was not feelin that so real gets my vote for the decent punches along with nice vocab with the verse, cobra elevate n improve you skillz with the flow and better punches
vote/real
THE FAMILY.
aight this wuz an almost even battle
king...yer shit wuz dope except fer da lines where u rhymez wit like half a word....for example:
got ur self asking "who" are u like jae millz,
while i running u over like corey dill...........
ya i wuznt feelin dat.
Real....mane wut can i say? yer shitz alwazy dope.
V//Real Thorough
werd...thanks for the feed back, and I think its safe to say good battle wit out a nigga gettin the big head, and UPPIN #1
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Very Nice Battle Here, Can We Please Get Some Good Feed Back, And Votes.
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*SIGHS HERE ALSO*
Another good battle being wasted, this shouldn't get towards the bottom of the thread
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King - Your verse was aight. Your punches were ok. But you didnt have any personals. Well not any good ones u mentioned hes 19 but i dont see that as being a good personal, far from it.
Real - Your verse was aight too. Your punches hit harder than ya opponents. U included personals about his name which were aight. (in my opinion if u dont use personals u aint gonna win a battle)
I thought both of your flow was ok i understood both of them.
But im givin it to real for harder punches but mainly for better personals.
v/ Real thorough
If yas have got d time 2 vote fairly on the battle in my sig wud appreciate it.
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Archilleez VS Elljay B
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my bad i cant poll my vote i thought it was 100 posts to vote.
my bad, i suppose its a bit of feedback for yas anyways.
LEAVE AN HONEST VOTE ON THESE OPEN BATTLES - LEAVE A LINK AND I WILL LEAVE AN HONEST VOTE ON YOURS
Archilleez VS Elljay B
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