got knocked

[1up]

still livin' in fear, cuz of the first time I got knocked
finga caused the trigger to make the 40 straight pop
so you know, spent a couple months on the low
nobody know what was up with the spot an' them bows
but po-po, shit, they came a knockin'
rollin' 30 deep, flashbang in the crib, ain't no stoppin'
so I told 'em, you some pussy ass mothafuckin' cowards
next thing you know, they closin' the door, and proved cowards
i'm on the floor, face bloody, wasn't even no powda
in my own crib, rockin' steel bracelets, with no powa
i'm wakin' up, and at the station they askin' me questions
like what did you have, and who gon' be representin'
i said ionno shit, and i ain't goin' out like no ho bitch
so cases they said i'd be catchin', still ain't heard shit
part of me wanna cop birds -- shhhiiiiiitttt,
part of me wanna straight buurrrnnn clips
ain't really with this livin' in fears grip
most of my dogs thought I done turned bitch
but it ain't shit - so I just jumped back on the grind
always down to hustle for mines, just like it was '99
but every night i go to sleep scared
not tryin' ta wake up in jail, cuz that's like livin' in hell
snatch ya freedom, snatch ya pride, son that shit is really real
but if it come to it, I'mma do mines, ain't shit the second time
but shit, a felony for the third time? I'mma turn nines
either at them dirty jakes, or my own fuckin' face
cuz it's 3 strikes ya out, i ain't doin' life in that place
and i'm already on paper, so i keep capers at a slow pace
i ain't afraid, but don't really need ta catch a case
only thing left to do, is steady keep tha lawyer paid
but every time the door slam, I'm straight fearin' a raid
I can remember, back when shit was just all good
hustlin' every day, kept my shit real hood like suge
but now when I come and go, I keep it on the low
cuz I ain't tryin' to talk to the faggot ass DA no mo
oh no -- shit son, I thought they was comin' ta get me
i guess they was just chasin' some foo, bustin' his semi
damn dog, one of these days I'mma get my head right
but for now that statute just steady keepin' me up at night



shit, I had some nightmare shit when I passed out for a minute this morning, and was relivin' all this shit....just had to drop a lil' freestyle piece.

shit, and anybody that's been where I been....it's all good, one of these days shit will be gravy like avy's in the 80's

one.

[1up]

shit my bad...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=239411&page=2
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=239712

[noncentz]

nice delivery...some thug shit in it which im not a fan of but in respect you did very well.i'll be looking for more of your work cause you got easily visible talent.

[1up]

good looks on the feed man, appreciate you sayin' i've got talent.

'bout to check out some of that shit in your sig.

one.

[1up]

shit, 17 views, one feed?

nobody got anything else to say?

upped and shit

also check the sig, tryin' ta get that shit closed.

one.

[P. Mortuus]

1up ya did it dog, ya upped ya self and rhymed out better, carry on this line and y'all make a rep for ya self. Peace out Dog

[1up]

1up ya did it dog, ya upped ya self and rhymed out better, carry on this line and y'all make a rep for ya self. Peace out Dog

good lookin' out dog, glad to hear you was feelin' it.

hit me up with a link anytime, always down for feed and shit.

one.

EDIT:
shit mayne...bunch of adjectives and shit need to be fixed up in that shit....I'm on 2 hrs sleep, which was before the 6 hours or w/e of drinkin'....shit I need to get up on the sleep tip or some shit

[SkullBreaker]

yo im not a fan of gangster rap like that either but u did good son, just get ur vocab better andull be good son

[J-Hova]

yo this peice wasnt to bad if u work on ur vocabs it woulda been good but keep it up though