god help me please im begging you
sometimes it seems as you dont come through
like when my granny died i asked why you took her away
6 months later my best friend was killed why do you bring so much pain
i never turned my back on you, never!
so why you turn yours on me, huh? why? im stumped
i cant figure out why you do this to me
so one more time god im begging help me please
**kinda short but i got the message out**
to me this was like this
a young guy standing in the middle of a dark alley
fucking screaming at the top of his lungs
getting it all of his chest
releasing steam
about deaths and tragedies and the *why'mes*
a statement with a liul bit of ryhming words in it lol
nonetheless every one needs to vent
tthanx for the feed uppin for more feed...........
dont kno much bout poetry hommie but i felt u mayne on the topic cuz me and my grandma were tight and when she died i felt the same why keep droppin mayne
im dope.
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it was short but thaats how u get better from ur mistakes, but it was nice for short poem
respect i kno how u feel
thanx for the feed uppin for more.................
i felt that man it was short but it could be better
but good drop man
thanx for the feed................................
uppin for feed its much apreciated...................
im feelin this it was short but it was direct str8 to the point in these streets i feel that way every day cuz sombody is always leaving this earth
thanx for the feed..................uppin for more
uppin for more feedback...........................
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