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    Violents
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    Fire In The Projects

    Everyday niggas dieng in these citys, whether its murder, disease or straight up tragedy
    R.I.P too al my lost hoodlums

    (fire engine sirens)

    Ayo,
    Fire in The projects, Somebody call the cops
    Theres a fire down the block, i aint callin the cops
    Theres a fire in the projects, now they hoppin off the top
    and the FD and The PD is blockin off the block

    Ayo Miller projects, '04 niggas on the top floor
    lobbys burnin up where the fiends used to cop raw
    children lit up like candles, sprinklers is goin off
    but the buildin is collapsin liek the beams is gettin blow torched
    Debris in the parkin lot, fallin off the buildin
    black mothers cryin in the street cuz they lost they children
    Im down the block i heard sirens, niggas screamin for water
    looked out the window, the whole block looked like a sauna
    Yellow tape and Fire Engines with equipment in the back
    niggas lookin even more black, ashes on they fitted caps
    gangstas in the lobby, now gangstas in the grave
    FD sprayin water but the fires in a rage
    the fires in a blaze, my eyes sore from this eyesore
    and the government wonderin why we get high for
    But to the tenants up in miller, that passed away
    In happiness and peace i hopeyour caskets lay



    Ayo,
    Fire in The projects, Somebody call the cops
    Theres a fire down the block, i aint callin the cops
    Theres a fire in the projects, now they hoppin off the top
    and the FD and The PD is blockin off the block


    yeah i know yo uaint used to heari nthat form a nigga like me

    R.I.P

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    you need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    when i start gettin feed ill drop links uppin

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    Quote Originally Posted by Violents
    when i start gettin feed ill drop links uppin

    lolz for real


    anyway i was feeling this joint as a ghetto song i think u got good flows up in here and sum good wordplay.. good length to the story and interesting ghetto imagey
    str8 outta the hood n shit
    yeah i think its good action packed top dog ish

    check 1 of my joint out

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=238276

    pz
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    good shit mayne.

    definitely feelin' the topic. good vocab, and wordplay, flow is straight.

    oh, but you should really get up on those links, or they'll close up your shit, surprised they didn't yet.

    holla back if you want
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...52#post3280652

    one.

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    U need to elevate on ya struc and flo cuz that flo, i really was not feelin that shit okae... the vocab wuz kinda weak so try get up on that the topic was good just need more action to it

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    U need to elevate on ya struc and flo cuz that flo, i really was not feelin that shit okae... the vocab wuz kinda weak so try get up on that the topic was good just need more action to it also it didnt rhyme so work on the rhymes N shit okay

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    Debris in the parkin lot, fallin off the buildin
    black mothers cryin in the street cuz they lost they children
    Im down the block i heard sirens, niggas screamin for water
    looked out the window, the whole block looked like a sauna


    these are some strong bars...liked em a lot
    Harmon

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    Quote Originally Posted by Violents
    when i start gettin feed ill drop links uppin
    Buzzzzzttt! Wrong answer! You'll drop links asap or your open mics will be closed.

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