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    The Root of All Evil 180.

    The Root of All Evil 180

    Careful with the procedures, within this tube is life
    Some say we stole their rights but under the lime light
    We search for answers, those wish we could cure
    Diseases that multiply, and with a blood so pure
    Our research can be completed, with no flaws and
    The funding from the governments cut so we pause then
    Try and make up for the loss, techniques to savage
    Any accomplishments that were ranked above average
    The team took into consideration losing patience
    People need to realize that the world is our patient
    Our science is a way of protection, luring days
    That we can find time to answer cancer, while curing aids
    And still the world’s ignorance, acts as a distraction
    This research isn’t work it’s become my life’s passion
    Irrational oppositions, make tactical maneuvers to
    Stop our project again and act as if we’re abusing you
    These people volunteered, offering a hand of help
    None of non-supporters rejected god’s hand themselves
    Fact is fact, a legend is a myth, and we just tell the truth
    That’s exactly why the politicians are not in favor of what we do
    Separating the tiny molecules, the new era of cells
    With this research if an error occurs with genetics we can tell
    Controversial or not, this science doesn’t harm it intends well
    So before its rejected based on religion remember..

    God isn’t the stem cell.
    AI[/size]fuck you.

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    Damn this piece suprised me a lot of OM'S have been terrible lately this is the best ive read for a long while. The concept was cool i like reading the deeper OM'S i get bored of reading the typical Drug/Thug shit so i'll give you props for being original. The story was told very well, your vocab was used perfectly for this piece you didnt just use the big words for the sake of it you made all the lines make sense which i appreciate. It was cool you was asking questions but also giving answers. Your imagery in the piece was deep you mixed a lot of emotion in the piece i think if you added another verse to this it would be a very good audio. The only thing i could criticise is the flow try and work on the syllables add in some multies this will make your pieces slightly more complex. But overall this was an impressive Om.

    Return the feed on my last OM:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=236625

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    yo rap is ok to sum reads 7/10

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    thanks warchild, i'll try and get back with the feedback, a little busy right now but I will find time.

    oh and fuck you mcbadboy.
    AI[/size]fuck you.

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    ^^....
    AI[/size]fuck you.

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    Yo, This Is A Dope Piece Man, This Is Deep, But Like, Technilogical, And Scientific, And Religious, Like...All At The Same Time...LOL.....But I Like The Wordplay In This Son....Was Dope.......You Constructed This Piece Perfectly!!!


    Keep 'Em Comin'....


    Pz.

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    thanks fam..
    AI[/size]fuck you.

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    Hey we need to collab whenever I have time..but you're a pretty nice topical head..

    feeling the message in this piece..

    The team took into consideration losing patience
    People need to realize that the world is our patient
    Our science is a way of protection, luring days
    That we can find time to answer cancer, while curing aids
    And still the world’s ignorance, acts as a distraction
    This research isn’t work it’s become my life’s passion

    ^dope..truth..maintained the concept throughout the verse

    good shit

    I'm feeling this...
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    thanks nique.. yeah we def will, hit me up on aim with the topic.
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    That was a really deep piece my man. Very good, the topic was definately something new and gave everyone something to think about. The flow was a little off at times to me but overall it was a very good piece. Keep it up fam!

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    Damn Girl!

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    alias i would guess cus this was pretty damn good...........ur structure was all good and the whole piece flowed together well. u had some multies in your verse so that always a plus when it comes to the flow....this was a pretty hot drop so keep them coming

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    no alias, just an old head. thanks everyone
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