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  1. #1
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    Join Date
    Jul 2005
    Location
    cali
    Posts
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    check this out an give me feedback

    yeah im young as fuck im only seventeen/
    but im still up early wit them crack fiends/
    in my bag theres a bong a lite an some weed/
    trust in me man i got just what you need/
    im up 3 in mornin wit some crack in my sock/
    an the heats in my pants even if im on my block/
    careful who i talk to cuz it might be a cop/
    an when they act funny they get dumbass shot/
    my dads gone away im cookin crack in the kitchen/
    cant get a record deal so im goin stay wishin/
    these faggits stay jealous so i know that they bitchin/
    my enemys shootin but they purposly missin/
    an with all that goin on i still aint trippin/
    just do what i gotta do just to get by/
    an i dont give a fuck im ready to die/
    so i keep a fo five thas waitin fo yo live/
    i smoke grams a day just so i can manage/
    i take over tracks an i know u cant stand it/
    i hear yall talkin an know that yall hatin/
    but i keep doin my thing im just waitin/
    cuz one of these days im goin catch ya in the street/
    an ima see ya body shake as my gun make a beat/
    these bullets cost a bit but u can catch em for free/
    an i got a bunch of skitzos standin behind me/
    ya thats my team an we all insane/
    got semi automatics an love to see brain/
    when i hear u kids talkin i think what a dumbshyt/
    cuz when i ryde yall know i gotta full clip/
    an if i bring out the strap you know im goin dump it/
    i know if i start shootin yall will duck quick/
    get down pray to god that u dont go get hit/
    but theres not much protection when im standin above u/
    an only a few seconds to wish u aint make that dumb move/
    an i wish your crew would come seek revenge/
    cuz its bulletproof everything in my new benz/
    an when i step out ya know i got that vest/
    let my soliders get at u then come shoot whats left/
    go to my pad smoke a couple reverse/
    then ill go to my computer spit a new verse/
    hit up ya hood an leave yall in a herse/
    all that shyt talkin yall need to stop it/
    or u goin get a one way trip to the coraners office/
    have ya place blocked off wit yellow tape/
    cuz i kicked in ya back door an u couldnt escape/
    neighbors seein a body bag an some white chalk/
    bet i got you wishin that you woulda never talk/
    detectives gettin no fingerprints or a good ID/
    cause i had gloves an a mask so yall couldnt see me/
    got everyone sayin god damn whata mess/
    now u understand why im the king of the west!!!
    Static


    "the bottom line is im a crook wit a deal, if my records dont sell im a rob an steal" --- 50 cent "how to rob"


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  2. #2
    Banned
    Join Date
    Aug 2003
    Location
    Mifflinburg, PA
    Posts
    6,693
    Battle Record
    12-1
    needs legit title

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