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Thread: Jesus's Justice (Written in 5mins)

  1. October 6th, 2005, 05:53 AM #1
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    Jesus's Justice (Written in 5mins)

    It’s a depressing felling seeing people dead
    Lil hood boys being unfornutally mislead
    Into shit that you never thought youd see them in
    Cutting up a bitch saying its not a sin
    Well it is man its a fucking disgrace
    It aint the time n not the fucking place
    To see people deing in the hood
    Many men see shit but not their sons blood
    So I pleading now for jesus’s justice
    Cause I cant go on living like this
    I see all sorts of shit in the news
    My early life crisis my mid town blues
    Yeah shit happened in the past
    But surely my sorrow wont last
    Cause living like this is sorrow
    Hoping the night before I wont live tomorrow
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  2. October 6th, 2005, 06:13 AM #2
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    Uhhh.. your talking about 'hood' when your from the UK? You cant even begin to portray the imagery.

    Before you come back and say you live in a run down druggy estate in east ham, dont.

    I suppose it was ok, you had a point to it, and it rhymed well.. but there was no real emotion involved which is what the topic needed to shine. You also need to work on your grammar, or it can throw people off your flow - which is bad.

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  3. October 6th, 2005, 10:09 AM #3
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    good rap man like the rhymes 7/10
  4. October 6th, 2005, 10:35 AM #4
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    Thats just sad. Nice to see you comment on your own work though.
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  5. October 6th, 2005, 10:37 AM #5
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  6. October 6th, 2005, 10:50 AM #6
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    Me and you are the only 2 people who have posted in this thread? What you mean 'who?'

    *Leaves thread muttering something about herbs*
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  7. October 8th, 2005, 06:04 PM #7
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    no there have bin 3 ppl postin on this and 4 includeing me
    MCL................mcbadoay....................... .....Dam'd Illusive Pimpernell.......................and !! Rap Reaper !!
    nice 1 i think it has alot of meaning and really good for 5 min
    Evry one is gonna die some day and when you do ..................... ill be there you can count on it
  8. October 8th, 2005, 07:43 PM #8
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    i agree with my pal rap reaper i think the rap had a lot of meaning and mcl skills are getting better as he keeps writing raps in shorter times
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    Quote Originally Posted by !! Rap Reaper !!
    no there have bin 3 ppl postin on this and 4 includeing me
    MCL................mcbadoay....................... .....Dam'd Illusive Pimpernell.......................and !! Rap Reaper !!
    nice 1 i think it has alot of meaning and really good for 5 min
    The fuck at you having the same IP as me. And dude, he IS mcbadboy. He went on a different account and gave himself feed... but meh.
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  10. October 8th, 2005, 07:50 PM #10
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    actually he's not cause me ,rap reaper,mcl and mcbadboy r a group of mates who live in the same area only mcbadboy and mcl r relly good friends so
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    Quote Originally Posted by Collisioncourse
    actually he's not cause me ,rap reaper,mcl and mcbadboy r a group of mates who live in the same area only mcbadboy and mcl r relly good friends so
    Wow, what a poor area. Are any of you bad boys going to leave him feed? *last post*
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  12. October 9th, 2005, 05:50 AM #12
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    Closed. You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics you've left decent feedback on, and your drop has to be a decent standard.

    And since you replied to your own thread using an alias you just got put on the warning list.

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