why make this a final you got to much talent to deny cats your work it is easy to elivate when peep can pattern some thought and use u for inspiration
peep my drops if u can i need the help of critism
why make this a final you got to much talent to deny cats your work it is easy to elivate when peep can pattern some thought and use u for inspiration
peep my drops if u can i need the help of critism
to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
Thanks for the feed, uppin.
Just replied to a couple more Om's how about some more feed on this, uppin.
Ok, this piece was good. The imagery of what you were saying in each line was ok, i suppose it wasnt wrote to paint a picture, but your rhyming and flow was excellent.
The humour was good for the piece, and you didnt seem to show any sign of running out of punches so well done. A good piece.
You know how i write, youve commented on my work.. So ill say that you should try and fuse some emotion and a story into your work - this will make it so much better.
PE|WV
Appreciate the feed, i do write emotional stuff but i prefer putting my punchlines on here this is my last Om so no more shits gonna be posted by me after Friday.
Uppin this.
that was nice overall to much self rep though
but it was good
thats good for last OM
that piece was nice stay up
Uppin This For The Last Time.
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