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  1. October 3rd, 2005, 03:50 PM #1
    EvOLuTioN
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    Ill Rappa

    Yo i need this rated for my book, but don thin kany differently of me this was a long time ago i wrote this in 2002

    Yo, ime the ill rappa here to shut you out...
    All my Fame and glory is enuf to make you pout...
    They call me the Evolution and i'm here to rock the mic...
    My skillz so tight, they'll take 1 glance at me and tell you to take a hike...
    They set a date for you to go on tour...
    ten minutes later them bitches knockin on my door...
    I aslo got the looks to score...
    You sittin there thinkin how the hell i fuck this whore...

    Follow this plz:
    1) overall rating 1-10
    2) Flow rating 1-10
    3) word play rating 1-10
    4) structure rating 1-10
    5) critizism and or comments

    thx this is to help my book

    Remember this isn't my elevated shit
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    "I'm not cocky, I'm confident
    So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment    "
    -JADAKISS

    I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
    Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
    -EvOLuTioN
  2. October 3rd, 2005, 04:12 PM #2
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    there was nothin special in this piece.. it was ok.. not good, great, or anything.. it was just ok. also it was very short.. yeah and i no your much elevated now
  3. October 3rd, 2005, 04:17 PM #3
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    its better than some stuff i here
  4. October 3rd, 2005, 06:32 PM #4
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    lmao thanx guyz and kidd thats sad cuz i was 12 wen i wrote that...rofl
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    "I'm not cocky, I'm confident
    So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment    "
    -JADAKISS

    I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
    Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
    -EvOLuTioN
  5. October 3rd, 2005, 06:32 PM #5
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    Need help on my votes. Please up.
  6. October 3rd, 2005, 06:36 PM #6
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    Lol...sure can u just leave a rating? In return ile vote
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    "I'm not cocky, I'm confident
    So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment    "
    -JADAKISS

    I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
    Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
    -EvOLuTioN
  7. October 3rd, 2005, 06:45 PM #7
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    Lol @ telling us how to critique you.. ratings are gay.

    But yeah, i didnt like it that much i guess, the title didnt even really set me in the right mood for reading. But yeah, i didnt really "Feel" it much i guess, i mean, im not trying to shoot you down. Keep doing it, and ill keep checking your stuff and seeing you progress, because if you keep writing, you will get better. Dont get discouraged, get better.

    Yeah.
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  8. October 3rd, 2005, 06:46 PM #8
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=237533

    overall rating 3-10
    flow rating 6-10
    word play rating 0-10
    structure rating 5-10

    elevate and get rid of everything a the end
    no

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    or

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    its annoying as fuck

    and post the rating chart in a different post so it looks better
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    Poetry

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    Last Word
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    this is perhaps the gayest thread...ALIVE....
  9. October 3rd, 2005, 07:48 PM #9
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    I aint gonna give u the 1-10 ratings, but i will say i liked ur flow, i think u could have elevated your vocab but eveything else like structure was good, id give u a 7/10 overall... good work.... EDIT: for somthing not elevated...

    Hey guys check the link in my pro vote fairly...
  10. October 3rd, 2005, 08:00 PM #10
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    arite ile hit your link and thanks for the feed
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    "I'm not cocky, I'm confident
    So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment    "
    -JADAKISS

    I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
    Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
    -EvOLuTioN
  11. October 3rd, 2005, 08:00 PM #11
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    and pharoah last time i used the "/" this 1 dude sed it made my raps look like i was illiterate...lol
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    "I'm not cocky, I'm confident
    So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment    "
    -JADAKISS

    I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
    Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
    -EvOLuTioN
  12. October 3rd, 2005, 11:41 PM #12
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    Uppin for a few more ratings
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    "I'm not cocky, I'm confident
    So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment    "
    -JADAKISS

    I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
    Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
    -EvOLuTioN
  13. October 4th, 2005, 06:29 AM #13
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    2) Flow rating -7
    3) word play rating -2
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    5) critizism and or comments-had some good character about.. just too short for me to really get into

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  14. October 4th, 2005, 10:15 AM #14
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    nice flow i think u can rap wikid 10/10
  15. October 4th, 2005, 05:52 PM #15
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    Wow thatx vortex that was very helpful and right about my estimations thx man that was a solid
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    "I'm not cocky, I'm confident
    So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment    "
    -JADAKISS

    I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
    Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
    -EvOLuTioN
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