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    Newbie synister's Avatar
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    Selfish

    i cant be contained these rhymes bleed from the brain
    so absourb the blood of a misfit gon compleatly insain
    i got lines of rhymes just awating public notice
    haters and bitches wont keep me down just know this
    no ive never shot at cops and i havnt slit a throat
    i dont rock blinged out chains or mink fur coats
    i do write my own shit thers no copy and paste
    i am serious as hell so dont say this time is a waste
    i have sold dope but not for a very long time
    im just a striving MC who must be the best of all time
    i do spit outside the computer im not just a netcee
    i cant write a damn verse with out scribbleing my shits messy
    and I know i need work on my metaphors and wordplay
    and through this screen i know all them "toasters you own" cant hurt meh
    i know you can claim all you want cuz this is entertainment
    but how can you keep real whats fictionall in the same sense
    yo i got slugs for snitches// no love for bitches// putting thugs in ditches// when my trigger finger itches//// ~ Big L

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    Yo can i get some feedback ????
    yo i got slugs for snitches// no love for bitches// putting thugs in ditches// when my trigger finger itches//// ~ Big L

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    Baby-Smile'z
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    It Was Okay......but Is'nt Thurr Already A Song By Slumvilllage Called Selfish N-e Wayz It Was Pretty Good..

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    MY bad ..... yea there is a song by slum village called selfish, i wasnt thinking... anyway [B]can i get some more feed back please?
    yo i got slugs for snitches// no love for bitches// putting thugs in ditches// when my trigger finger itches//// ~ Big L

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    Blah.

    first of all learn to spell.
    Complexify your rhyme scheme.
    talk about something

    then maybe ill give u a decent reply.
    Always Impervious an Axis Power.


    Supermod Me.

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    it was all rite but u gotta work on ur flow

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