Lyrical Holocaust (Final OM)

[warchild]

Some people think i might suffer from Mental Problems
I do but dont worry im medicated plus i let my Pencil Solve Em
You just a fan so you use Quotes To Honour Us
My minds unbalanced cutting more Folks Than Coroners
The assistants are putting your torn Torso On A Slab
Im writing non stop rhymes putting Raw Flows On A Pad
I write Sick Singles not Bitch Jingles or Pop Hits
You others mc's couldnt be G's if you turned into what my Cock Spits
Producers send me their beats thinking Maybe He'll Merk This
But im too busy shouting hermaphrodite at Jaime Lee Curtis
Yes that's a rumour but like prostitutes with stds i Gotta Spread It
Yo i havent even started yet muthafucka you best Stop The Credits
They hate Eminem so maybe the source will give me a Front Cover
I never did no racist tapes so lets chill out and smoke a Blunt Brother
People with Nines Stay On The Street, My Rhymes Stay On The Beat
If i Feel Like It, i Deal Trife Shit, so My Mind Stays On The Grief
If rap was acting id probably be the Illest Like Brando
When it comes to the competition i gotta Kill It Like Dando
So go buy more rhyme books im killing Snitches With Blades
I like testing death so im constantly fucking Bitches With Aids

My personality is complex so you better take a Back Seat
I call every rapper a pussy even the ones who Clap Heat
I hate the royal family but i wanna put my dick in the Queens Twat
Cause that would be more funny than fat joe trying to Lean Back
Not only have i got punchlines and metaphors my Flows Solid Too
I make mcs embarassed like dizze when he was stabbed by the So Solid Crew
I like scrapping but if you dont we can go Straight To The Guns
When it comes to bitches you might as well be Dating A Nun
Everyday im more pissed than oliver reed on his Last Breath
Im still underground cause MTV aint licking my Ass Yet
Im not a genius i just write Songs With Some Wit In
Im old school i still think women Belong In The Kitchen
Im not even listening to you muthafuckas you just Bite Quotes
If your gonna diss me your gonna have to do better than White Jokes
Theres been 13 attempts on my life so i walk with Caution Still
If i aint untouchable what you call surving 60 Abortion Pills
I turn Church Attenders into the Worst Offenders
Im leaving this site but before i leave i'll Curse The Members
Too Extreme, You A Fiend, im Due A Dream, Persue A Scheme
To Get Rich, smack you with my Left Fist, View The Scene
Cause your an angel now i cant apoligise for you being a Sorry Fag
So i did the next best thing put your fucking frame in a Body Bag

This is my last Om two verses of crazy shit punches etc.
I'll be uppin this till next friday then im outta here moving in with one of my mates cause my mothers kicking me out lol so enjoy this shit.

[LISTEN]

nice spit, the only thing is u used a little to much self glory.one other problem i had was at the beginning i thought that it was gonna be concious but then u switched up and started dissin industrie niggas and u put punch lines in that made it almost like a battle. but good job 7.5/10

[warchild]

Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=234753
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=236614

[Nique.]

this was cool, not really my kind of Open Mic, but this alright...flow was pretty cool..transitions were smooth...this was more of the audio type of piece but nevertheless it was a cool drop..punches were decent..but you maintained a solid concept and content through the two verses..i've seen this type of topic too many times, so this wasn't mindblowing, but it was readable..cool shit

[ADR]

...metas and punches galour and sick ones i mte add...was feelin ur operner but yea u did kinda gave it a switch....flow was perfect cauase while readin it i kept the same head bop movement thats whassup vocab was decent u aint ttry and sound all that smart u kpt the vocab simple we needed to be and complexed when it fit in ....mutlsi were there of course o that added another demension to ur flow...over all i can actually here this as an audio fam word...

sad thing ur donedroppin ....

peace

[warchild]

Thanks for the feed, logging off to go have a couple of beers, uppin.

[SwiftMenace]

I was feeling it, really was ...

"Im not even listening to you muthafuckas you just Bite Quotes
If your gonna diss me your gonna have to do better than White Jokes"

lol, good shit kid, i enjoyed it alot ... only thing i didnt like was like listen said it was very self-glorified ... but other than that i like it .. keep doin ya thing fam

[the kid kg]

it was hot

[The Vortex]

Some people think i might suffer from Mental Problems
I do but dont worry im medicated plus i let my Pencil Solve Em

haha

folks than coroners....yes

lots of nasty grime punches...

a slight problem with this line for me-i think u shudda added jill up in there...so

When it comes to the competition i gotta Kill It Like Jill Dando

I hate the royal family but i wanna put my dick in the Queens Twat


for fucks sake man.. i swear to whatever i was thinking of that fucking with the queen line the other day..for fucks sake thats my own sick thought right there...



dizzy ha ha bored up


yeah heavy spits,

get up in some battles i say n merk sum suhns

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[warchild]

Lol i wrote that queen line months ago when i first saw the video for Terror squads lean back, i just thought of something that rhymee with lean=Queens Twat. Psychos think a like son so dont worry im sure you can think of other sick shit to write. My mind is always in psycho mode whether im out in the pub or with a pen and pad in hand. I aint gonna battle no one im leaving the site fri no more net access so this is my last Om.

[The Vortex]

nah u gotta stay on man

use the library or something

[Tomkat]

nice drop man you had great structure, vocab, punches, it was all there, keep on doin it mayne

[Legacy01]

Haha..man, i couldnt done better muself...infact, i didnt get near to as much complexity and hard hittin lines as you did... fukin dope drop...this was real tight, imagery was gr8 lol, n i loved the punches that came outta this....too many to bring down ere tho..but gr8 drop, 10/10 for me....and you boasted your skill to perfection, this was a gr8 drop

[Uncensored]

punchlines were crazy and you transitioned well,but the topic is kinda worn out but all in all u still ripped lil' oc

[warchild]

Appreciate the feed just replied to another 5 OM'S so how about some more feedback on this.Uppin.