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Thread: Friends, Foe's,Life's Changes

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    .Vendetta.
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    Friends, Foe's,Life's Changes



    Friends Turn Into Foe's And When You Least Expect It They Strike
    Foe's Want To Become Friends, Beef's Not Forever, And Remain Loyal
    Life Changes Quick, I Got To Many Dead Hommie's To Live In This Life


    Achilles
    Liljay
    Ilelstfreestyler

    Achilles
    Niggas Say I'm The Best, When It Come's To Rap
    But Home Boy's Not A Gangster, No Gun's To Clap
    I Keep To Myself, I'm Not The Type To Talk Shit
    All I Need Is Life, Teeth, And Cash To Walk With
    Fuck Friends They Change, Hate, Love And Hate
    We're Not On The Same Road Here, Cus I'm Great
    Not To Moan And Groan Home Alone Smoke Blown
    Float My Own Boat, Spoke In My Own Throat Stone
    Drowning In Life's Palms My Arms Grips, Won't Hold
    Calm, No Moms, Don's Near, Still, My Life Don't Go
    Desicrated Face, Hesitated State, Innocuous Fate
    On The Corner, Niggas Really Think Popping Is Great
    I'm Hopping This State, Till He Pull A Glock On His Waste
    But I'm Not In His Face, My Own Self Is A Mochary State
    Documentary Race, So I'm Holding On To Palm's In Grip
    Bin Holding Myself Down Forever, Now My Arms In Rip
    What The Fuck Will It Take For Freinds To Return
    Making Ends Not A Question, Cause My Ends'll Burn

    Hooks-Liljay & Illestfreestyler
    You know who your foes are but keep your friends closer
    and times get deepen and the times make you inclosher
    Cant depend on no one and life makes ya lines blow
    show how the past is the future and every thing unfolds
    deep in your heart shows that a blind man can see
    even if you over board ill still pull you from sea



    World's Changing Everyday People Are Aging In Everyway
    Who Knows What The World Would Be If The Friends Were Your Foes
    World Of Torment Need To Ease The Pain I Got To Seize The Game
    Keys Of Fame So Close Yet So Far The Foes Can See My Shame
    Be My Name And You Feel The Load I Must Carry
    Stick By My Struggle And You Will Be My Truest Hommie


    Achilles
    I Bin Rapping For Two Years, Seems Like I Get No Love
    I Met A Mug, Stepped To Thugs, But I Respect It Cus
    Neglected Us, Most Underrated Like Court Inspections Was
    Prevented Us From Piviting, Living, Confess My Chest Cus
    Died Off Influences, Ruins My Thoughts, Reflecting Light
    Injecting Despite, The Effecting Rights, Slept To Ignite
    Speed's Above, Weed's A Must, In Order To Ease Pain
    These Trains, Breeze Mayn, Something Like Jeeze & Wayne
    Where's My Real Friends? So Many Time's I Ask Me That
    Cashing Stacks, Asking Facts, Got Enemies Pass My Back
    Camoflauge With Khaki's, I'm Paralized In My Own World
    Tried To Get My Deal, But Some How The Phone Curled
    Guess It Wasn't Meant To Be, Yep? Achilles And Emcee
    But I Don't Need The Love, I See All Feelings Against Me

    Hooks-Liljay & Illestfreestyler
    You know who your foes are but keep your friends closer
    and times get deepen and the times make you inclosher
    Cant depend on no one and life makes ya lines blow
    show how the past is the future and every thing unfolds
    deep in your heart shows that a blind man can see
    even if you over board ill still pull you from sea



    World's Changing Everyday People Are Aging In Everyway
    Who Knows What The World Would Be If The Friends Were Your Foes
    World Of Torment Need To Ease The Pain I Got To Seize The Game
    Keys Of Fame So Close Yet So Far The Foes Can See My Shame
    Be My Name And You Feel The Load I Must Carry
    Stick By My Struggle And You Will Be My Truest Hommie


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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=236817

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    .Vendetta.
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    The Return Off The Kid's

    Yes We Are Back...Get At Us Please.

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    JDP000109
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    Nice vocabulary, Alot of muliti's, It was deep shit and you kept it real.

    Overall it was nice i was feelin' it... Stay up!

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    .Vendetta.
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    Thank You Man Look For It In Audio Soon.

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    ...haha ...sick


    a..ur verse was the sickest...flow was banas i had a beat in my head the hole way....vocab was decent but ur complexity was ill creativity and imagery were on point fam werd up...props..

    lil jay...as well ur flow was ill u some had some ill lines as well....creativty was ill imagery was ur strong point....cant find nothing bad bout ur flow

    illest...ur verse was coo..couldve used a tad bit more complexity but overall u had a ill verse to..imagery and flow was ill...all of u guys have flow thats wassup....and all brought some emotion to the table...

    def lookin foward to some more shyt....maybe each on there on so i can see there uniqueness individually...

    werd

    please peep sig and drop feed ...thanks



    keep the illness alive


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    pretty dope. u guys know how to write. Ach came best, had really good rhyme.

    look forward to seein more writtens from u guys.

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    the flow was pretty simple and your rhyming scheme was pretty basic

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    .Vendetta.
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    Good Looking Everyone But There's Always One Person Who Will Hate The Flow But It's Cool AD Yo I'll Check Em..Maybe Me And You Collab Yo

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    CHorus wasnt too good...verses were real...but the way u said them WERE indeed basic..so now make me number two then...ha...
    *The Original.*

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    Wouldn't Talk Home Boy I Ko'ed You Before
    Nuff Said

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    Ignore the haters Ach this was a very good piece and i doubt say that a lot cause im an arrogant bastard. I just liked the concept you just started off saying you wasnt a gangster and you dont talk shit that was very strange to read on this board cause a lot of the KIDS on here think there thugs.
    And really there just 15 year old internet geeks so you might as well ignore most of the feed you get. Your flow was similar to mine so i gotta give you props for it cause i believe ive got one of the nicest flows on this site.
    You kept the multies consistent throughout the piece, your vocab was used well you didnt put a bunch of big words in there just for the sake of it.
    Your imagery was impressive and suprisingly honest so i really enjoyed reading it. Its a pity im leaving the site next week i think and collabo from me and you would be ill dont matter son your rhymes are dope.

    Return the feed on my last Om(I know you'll feel the flow):
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=236625

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    i enjoyed that, thought you did well here, keep up the good work.

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    i liked it.. the verses were crazy, i liked em alot.. i liked this all around

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    iiight thanks for the feedback

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    Yo Warchild For Sure Home Boy I Got You.

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