Lol.. another crazy style piece.. nice shit man.
Started off well.. some cool lines. Structure was pretty bad.. but mainly in the first verse.. second was fine. Wasn't many multies.. I dunno what the other feedback dude was on about.. but it had enough to keep me reading anyway.
Some funny lines.. & I thought the eat Gods embryo line was illy.
Overall.. not your best thing.. but for bits and pieces thrown together it's pretty good.
Props spa.