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    Murder in the Streets

    YO,

    Quite Nights in the streets, the corner hot wit beefs
    niggas hungry, starvin, for revenge not for red meat
    A hobo sits on the corner, sippin on a 40 he had to beg for
    No street lights, no po's to be seen, every house has a locked door
    darkness 24/7, hear gun shots, ask yourself, they bound Hell or Heaven
    There is murder in tha Streets, nuttin new, civilians see but keep steppin
    Not a damn thing changin, happens all the time like the Night and the Day
    Retaliation, Domination, niggas dien, the streets loosin its patience anyway
    Load ya glocks or ya techs ya aka's or ya uzi's make hearts skip beats
    This is life, what its made of, aint no stoppin it, its Murder in tha streets

    How many gotta die to stack they paper n make a living?
    How many gotta kill, to break bad, make a brotha stop breathin
    sit back in ask ya self these questions, take ya time have a seat
    who will be the one to die or the one to kill, its murder in the streets

    Murder Reings like a communist king, makes the calls with no remorse
    niggas do its dirty work, a guilty party, but it takes full credit of course
    aint ever gonna be arrested or prosicuted or put in jail, do any hard time
    but it will continue to be the Don of death for the rest of this lifetime
    Niggas frames twisted with hollowtips, keeps the streets in its sight
    where driveby's kill Brothers,sisters children, elderly, chea its not right
    Step back in visalize the terror tha streets can unleash on brothers mind
    Killin each other over, cash, drugs, bitches or sumtin that a nigga speaks
    When will the killin stop? Never, humanity will never get along,
    its murder in the streets

    How many gotta die to stack they paper n make a living?
    How many gotta kill, to break bad, make a brotha stop breathin
    sit back in ask ya self these questions, take ya time have a seat
    who will be the one to die or the one to kill, its murder in the streets

    Kill or be Killed. live life just to die in the end, do whatchu want
    makes mothers cry, brother die, homies lie, ya own self be reluctant
    Be paranoid of ya own race, itsa disgrace, get it in the back or ya face
    Murder shows no sympothy to Humanity, considering we doin the thang
    Take life like you jesus christ himself, niggas die, let em chalk the curb
    but when it is all said and done, you know your days are numbered
    who is it gonna be, and what is it gonna be for? take it, fell the heat
    You jus another pawn, another victim to faith, its Murder in the streets

    How many gotta die to stack they paper n make a living?
    How many gotta kill, to break bad, make a brotha stop breathin
    sit back in ask ya self these questions, take ya time have a seat
    who will be the one to die or the one to kill, its murder in the streets

    How many gotta die to stack they paper n make a living?
    How many gotta kill, to break bad, make a brotha stop breathin
    sit back in ask ya self these questions, take ya time have a seat
    who will be the one to die or the one to kill, its murder in the streets

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    Last edited by Spul Ka Trinde; September 20th, 2005 at 09:01 PM

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    okay6 wordplay and sturtur elavate your vocab i liked this just change your topic
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    uppin it to the top

    give some info

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    Iight, this was a decent piece, but could've been better. I felt that the imagery was on point a little, but some bars should've been worded better. Flow started off good but got bad the futher i went on, most of your lines were too stretched, some multi's could've fixed that though. Also, i saw a bar or two in the piece that didnt rhyme, for example, want/reluctant. Vocab could've upped a little also.

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