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YOU MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST THREE BATTLES N' POST LINKS.
Check in's are due by Thursday.
10-30 Lines, agree on it with your opponent.
Verses are due by FRIDAY 11:59 PM eastern.
Only LLL competitors may vote.
YOU MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST THREE BATTLES N' POST LINKS.
hows it goin
Last edited by J.Hens.; September 26th, 2005 at 03:35 AM
Monster's Ink
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made you look.
awww shit
in a crew run by young fuckin P
lmao.. alot of crews challenge LW.. gotta love it
wackness is a mystery.. but soon we'll get to the Bottom of it
I been a dick. cuz words inked from my pen is the shit
I'm the man.. n' it don't take a farmer to know a Hen is a bitch
don't even try me. cuz I been stompin shit n' this is my league
Feeble.. Nique.. Evolve.. c'mon bitch you're like my bye week
bye geek.. don't mention it. no way you'll stay in lead
n' if I take offense to shit.. that just leaves you playin D
forget it ya weak.. I'll show you how a veteran speak
you'll never live up to your Rep.. n' I'm already better than P
let the sedative seep.. all these haters feeding ruckus
man I've reached my breaking point.. so you'll be needing crutches
n' stay residing in ya bed. cuz the fighting leave you dead
it's obvious you fell off.. s'why Lay started biting me instead
I'll be the end of you. you know it. you dreadin the hour
don't wanna face me in battle.. so you turn your head like a coward
you take concepts n' flip em.. I take ya head n' smash it
they call you a legend on b-boys.. you should thank Resin faggot
it's useless to try, give up.. whatever angle dude I'm best
homie I'll kill your spirit. right after I strangle you to death
so don't bother feedin dun.. n' when the beatin's done
I'd send you my congrats. but you'll just get jealous readin em
pz.
Originally Posted by $pitacular
You're nothin on other sites. an' i ain't respectin that.
Anybody else find it funny..
..that the site he mods is the only one he's been successful at?
I don't need an excuse for why you're gitttin beat, cuz...
You're battle w/ Nique made you look like more of a bitch than she does.
What's the reason this time? quit complainin bastard.
Fuck ya crew too..
.. it's a FACT the Bottom Line always contains the Last Word.
I wanna KILL ya mother, but i don't need it, g.
Was gonna put a price on her head.. but then she gave it to me for free.
You're an idiot bro. but you're gettin murdered regardless.
You act like you're special.... but that's just another term for retarded.
Seriously queer, stop frontin cuz you ain't fuckin with this.
I asked to go head to head... and then Spit started to pucker his lips.
You hype yourself up, but that doesn't match the shit i've read.
Claim to have Legendary skills. but they seem more like a myth instead.
You're an ex-champ. haha.. and that's somethin to show.
Found out you were the king of LLL..
... and i wanted to replace the 2nd one with an O.
You'd have to steal this win to be killin the stakes.
But this coward doesn't even have a RISK that he's 'willin to take.
I dunno if it's true. cats got rumors, and they see em' spread.
Was about to say you had tight lines.. but i'll just tell that to JC instead.
You got some riders. this time this guy'll need em' more.
But ur right about one thing..
.. i ain't fuckin with you.....<- that's what you hired Feeble for.
Monster's Ink
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don't even try me. cuz I been stompin shit n' this is my league
Feeble.. Nique.. Evolve.. c'mon bitch you're like my bye week
forget it ya weak.. I'll show you how a veteran speak
you'll never live up to your Rep.. n' I'm already better than P
let the sedative seep.. all these haters feeding ruckus
man I've reached my breaking point.. so you'll be needing crutches
n' stay residing in ya bed. cuz the fighting leave you dead
it's obvious you fell off.. s'why Lay started biting me instead
so don't bother feedin dun.. n' when the beatin's done
I'd send you my congrats. but you'll just get jealous readin em
vs.
You hype yourself up, but that doesn't match the shit i've read.
Claim to have Legendary skills. but they seem more like a myth instead.
You're an ex-champ. haha.. and that's somethin to show.
Found out you were the king of LLL..
... and i wanted to replace the 2nd one with an O.
vote-Spit
a lot more creative with his verse than hens. Hens tried to throw
in a few cliche's..but he doesn't flip em as well as Spit. decent
battle though. I thought the 2 i quoted from hens were really
creative..just the lack of lines like so gave this to spit
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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I been a dick. cuz words inked from my pen is the shit
I'm the man.. n' it don't take a farmer to know a Hen is a bitch
^I thought this was a creative flip on a played nameplay
forget it ya weak.. I'll show you how a veteran speak
you'll never live up to your Rep.. n' I'm already better than P
let the sedative seep.. all these haters feeding ruckus
man I've reached my breaking point.. so you'll be needing crutches
n' stay residing in ya bed. cuz the fighting leave you dead
it's obvious you fell off.. s'why Lay started biting me instead
vs
I don't need an excuse for why you're gitttin beat, cuz...
You're battle w/ Nique made you look like more of a bitch than she does.
What's the reason this time? quit complainin bastard.
Fuck ya crew too..
.. it's a FACT the Bottom Line always contains the Last Word.
I wanna KILL ya mother, but i don't need it, g.
Was gonna put a price on her head.. but then she gave it to me for free.
^ROFL
You're an idiot bro. but you're gettin murdered regardless.
You act like you're special.... but that's just another term for retarded.
^ROFL
You hype yourself up, but that doesn't match the shit i've read.
Claim to have Legendary skills. but they seem more like a myth instead.
I got Hens taken this by a bar, close match tho, Hens jus came wit fire like his first 3 bars. Impressive battle but i think Hens took it, 1
Artificial Intelligence
Spit-
in a crew run by young fuckin P
lmao.. alot of crews challenge LW.. gotta love it
wackness is a mystery.. but soon we'll get to the Bottom of it
Blah blah
I been a dick. cuz words inked from my pen is the shit
I'm the man.. n' it don't take a farmer to know a Hen is a bitch
Eh.
don't even try me. cuz I been stompin shit n' this is my league
Feeble.. Nique.. Evolve.. c'mon bitch you're like my bye week
Ok.
bye geek.. don't mention it. no way you'll stay in lead
n' if I take offense to shit.. that just leaves you playin D
Ok.
forget it ya weak.. I'll show you how a veteran speak
you'll never live up to your Rep.. n' I'm already better than P
Ok.
let the sedative seep.. all these haters feeding ruckus
man I've reached my breaking point.. so you'll be needing crutches
Nah. Too old.
n' stay residing in ya bed. cuz the fighting leave you dead
it's obvious you fell off.. s'why Lay started biting me instead
Eh.
I'll be the end of you. you know it. you dreadin the hour
don't wanna face me in battle.. so you turn your head like a coward
No.
you take concepts n' flip em.. I take ya head n' smash it
they call you a legend on b-boys.. you should thank Resin faggot
Shoulda been worded way better. Ok.
it's useless to try, give up.. whatever angle dude I'm best
homie I'll kill your spirit. right after I strangle you to death
NO.
so don't bother feedin dun.. n' when the beatin's done
I'd send you my congrats. but you'll just get jealous readin em
Eh.
pz.
Overall- Honestly.. I wasn't feelin this at all. I dunno maybe it's just me honestly but nothing was dope at all. And a few of those concepts are in UPN's archives for sure. I could pull them.. but they are just flipped. Not bitten. Just sayin.. it wasn't very fresh at all..
J. Hens.
You're nothin on other sites. an' i ain't respectin that.
Anybody else find it funny..
..that the site he mods is the only one he's been successful at?
Ok.
I don't need an excuse for why you're gitttin beat, cuz...
You're battle w/ Nique made you look like more of a bitch than she does.
lol. Nice.
What's the reason this time? quit complainin bastard.
Fuck ya crew too..
.. it's a FACT the Bottom Line always contains the Last Word.
Eh. Didn't like this one. Sorry.
I wanna KILL ya mother, but i don't need it, g.
Was gonna put a price on her head.. but then she gave it to me for free.
LOL.
You're an idiot bro. but you're gettin murdered regardless.
You act like you're special.... but that's just another term for retarded.
LMAO. Yessss
Seriously queer, stop frontin cuz you ain't fuckin with this.
I asked to go head to head... and then Spit started to pucker his lips.
Cool. Don't let it get played. 2 in one verse. Anyone else catch the hidden wordplay ?
You hype yourself up, but that doesn't match the shit i've read.
Claim to have Legendary skills. but they seem more like a myth instead.
ok.
You're an ex-champ. haha.. and that's somethin to show.
Found out you were the king of LLL..
... and i wanted to replace the 2nd one with an O.
eh.
You'd have to steal this win to be killin the stakes.
But this coward doesn't even have a RISK that he's 'willin to take.
nah.
I dunno if it's true. cats got rumors, and they see em' spread.
Was about to say you had tight lines.. but i'll just tell that to JC instead.
eh.
You got some riders. this time this guy'll need em' more.
But ur right about one thing..
.. i ain't fuckin with you.....<- that's what you hired Feeble for.
eh.
Overall- Hensly came nice for a little stretch in his verse. Seriously a couple open'd my eyes up. Nicely done. Rest was solid enough to give the stand-outs more impact. Overall solid verse.
Vote- J.Hens.
He just had the better verse.
spit.
so don't bother feedin dun.. n' when the beatin's done
I'd send you my congrats. but you'll just get jealous readin em
^lmao.
anyway ile edit a vote in later
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exactly how i feel. anyway,
spit:
in a crew run by young fuckin P
lmao.. alot of crews challenge LW.. gotta love it
wackness is a mystery.. but soon we'll get to the Bottom of it
forget it ya weak.. I'll show you how a veteran speak
you'll never live up to your Rep.. n' I'm already better than P
let the sedative seep.. all these haters feeding ruckus
man I've reached my breaking point.. so you'll be needing crutches
= blah . seen too many similar lines to the breaking point, it really wasnt anything special anyway. just a different angle to an old concept. the bottom of it, shouldnt have made it into your verse..crew plays on bottom line are already old.
hens:
You're nothin on other sites. an' i ain't respectin that.
Anybody else find it funny..
..that the site he mods is the only one he's been successful at?
What's the reason this time? quit complainin bastard.
Fuck ya crew too..
.. it's a FACT the Bottom Line always contains the Last Word.
I wanna KILL ya mother, but i don't need it, g.
Was gonna put a price on her head.. but then she gave it to me for free.
Seriously queer, stop frontin cuz you ain't fuckin with this.
I asked to go head to head... and then Spit started to pucker his lips.
'your only successful at rb' punches = played & old. if you want to use one, make sure it has an exciting or interesting angle to it. last word plays and bottom line plays = played. the price on her head, witty, but it doesnt hit him at all! i seriously doubt you know his mother, and i seriously doubt if you did that she would give you head. it just had no place in a battle vs spit, your supposed to diss spit, & these days dissing someones mother just isnt half as effective. anything head / *insert punch about them wanting to give you head* = played
blah. the main problem with this battle was the lack of freshness. spit had more of it and both had some good lines. but hens screwed himself over with the first half of his verse. i dont even count this as spit winning, i count it as hens making himself lose. v - spit
spit-
I been a dick. cuz words inked from my pen is the shit
I'm the man.. n' it don't take a farmer to know a Hen is a bitch
no
don't even try me. cuz I been stompin shit n' this is my league
Feeble.. Nique.. Evolve.. c'mon bitch you're like my bye week
lmao nice
bye geek.. don't mention it. no way you'll stay in lead
n' if I take offense to shit.. that just leaves you playin D
nice wordplay
forget it ya weak.. I'll show you how a veteran speak
you'll never live up to your Rep.. n' I'm already better than P
ok
let the sedative seep.. all these haters feeding ruckus
man I've reached my breaking point.. so you'll be needing crutches
na 1st line was wack
n' stay residing in ya bed. cuz the fighting leave you dead
it's obvious you fell off.. s'why Lay started biting me instead
ha damn
I'll be the end of you. you know it. you dreadin the hour
don't wanna face me in battle.. so you turn your head like a coward
ok
you take concepts n' flip em.. I take ya head n' smash it
they call you a legend on b-boys.. you should thank Resin faggot
hahah
it's useless to try, give up.. whatever angle dude I'm best
homie I'll kill your spirit. right after I strangle you to death
tight line
so don't bother feedin dun.. n' when the beatin's done
I'd send you my congrats. but you'll just get jealous readin em
decent
j-hens
You're nothin on other sites. an' i ain't respectin that.
Anybody else find it funny..
..that the site he mods is the only one he's been successful at?
ok
I don't need an excuse for why you're gitttin beat, cuz...
You're battle w/ Nique made you look like more of a bitch than she does.
decent
What's the reason this time? quit complainin bastard.
Fuck ya crew too..
.. it's a FACT the Bottom Line always contains the Last Word.
wack
I wanna KILL ya mother, but i don't need it, g.
Was gonna put a price on her head.. but then she gave it to me for free.
na jokes
You're an idiot bro. but you're gettin murdered regardless.
You act like you're special.... but that's just another term for retarded.
hahahahaha
Seriously queer, stop frontin cuz you ain't fuckin with this.
I asked to go head to head... and then Spit started to pucker his lips.
hahahaahh
You hype yourself up, but that doesn't match the shit i've read.
Claim to have Legendary skills. but they seem more like a myth instead.
[b]no[b]
You're an ex-champ. haha.. and that's somethin to show.
Found out you were the king of LLL..
... and i wanted to replace the 2nd one with an O.
wordplay tight
You'd have to steal this win to be killin the stakes.
But this coward doesn't even have a RISK that he's 'willin to take.
no
I dunno if it's true. cats got rumors, and they see em' spread.
Was about to say you had tight lines.. but i'll just tell that to JC instead.
tight tight tight
You got some riders. this time this guy'll need em' more.
But ur right about one thing..
.. i ain't fuckin with you.....<- that's what you hired Feeble for.
lmao nice ass well
close battle spit got em
lmao.. alot of crews challenge LW.. gotta love it
wackness is a mystery.. but soon we'll get to the Bottom of it
I been a dick. cuz words inked from my pen is the shit
I'm the man.. n' it don't take a farmer to know a Hen is a bitch
let the sedative seep.. all these haters feeding ruckus
man I've reached my breaking point.. so you'll be needing crutches
n' stay residing in ya bed. cuz the fighting leave you dead
it's obvious you fell off.. s'why Lay started biting me instead
don't need an excuse for why you're gitttin beat, cuz...
You're battle w/ Nique made you look like more of a bitch than she does.
What's the reason this time? quit complainin bastard.
Fuck ya crew too..
.. it's a FACT the Bottom Line always contains the Last Word.
I wanna KILL ya mother, but i don't need it, g.
Was gonna put a price on her head.. but then she gave it to me for free.
You're an idiot bro. but you're gettin murdered regardless.
You act like you're special.... but that's just another term for retarded
You're an ex-champ. haha.. and that's somethin to show.
Found out you were the king of LLL..
... and i wanted to replace the 2nd one with an O.
Hens got this by a bar.
v. Hens
I been a dick. cuz words inked from my pen is the shit
I'm the man.. n' it don't take a farmer to know a Hen is a bitch (hehe)
forget it ya weak.. I'll show you how a veteran speak
you'll never live up to your Rep.. n' I'm already better than P
n' stay residing in ya bed. cuz the fighting leave you dead
it's obvious you fell off.. s'why Lay started biting me instead (lol)
so don't bother feedin dun.. n' when the beatin's done
I'd send you my congrats. but you'll just get jealous readin em
lmao
vs.
You're nothin on other sites. an' i ain't respectin that.
Anybody else find it funny..
..that the site he mods is the only one he's been successful at?
What's the reason this time? quit complainin bastard.
Fuck ya crew too..
.. it's a FACT the Bottom Line always contains the Last Word.
I wanna KILL ya mother, but i don't need it, g.
Was gonna put a price on her head.. but then she gave it to me for free. (lol)
You hype yourself up, but that doesn't match the shit i've read.
Claim to have Legendary skills. but they seem more like a myth instead.
You're an ex-champ. haha.. and that's somethin to show.
Found out you were the king of LLL..
... and i wanted to replace the 2nd one with an O.
funny battle enjoyed reading a lot of it, but Hens just got it IMO, close
v/Hens
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