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    Banned SeanRichNIGGA's Avatar
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    I'm so raw

    Yo I'm da one dats gonna rap tonight
    with ma niggas an ma ho's I be doin it right
    cause da dope ride we be passin is tight
    I got ma chronic xbox an satellite

    Life as a thug may be rough yo
    bug Sweet Mutha Fuckin J is tough yo
    Dats why I aint gots to ask yo
    An I be bustin caps in ya ass yo

    Who is the gangsta dats gonna last
    If ya steppin I be steppin like a shotgun blast
    then you be goin down like a foty
    And yo bitch be goin down on ma homie


    I'm the type a gangsta dats built to lass
    if ya step I put a Air Force Ones in yo Ass
    I'm like Nelly except smoother
    Like Fifty cept meana
    Like biggie cept leana
    Like Dre... listen to what I say

    I can't even believe how smoother I am
    I can't even believe it - it's just da way I am

    Cause I... am.. numba one
    No madda if you like it or not
    Say hey hey hey
    like fat albert
    den go down on my tip
    like lord calvert

    cause I.. be.. bustin nut
    I be so fly when I nut in yo eye
    Bu..BuBu Bu Bu Bu BuBuBu Bu...
    Bu Bubbu Bu Bu BuBuuu Bu BuBu Bustin nut

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    this was not a very good peice because of the elementry vocab................yo try putting more fellings into your peices and express them in your words...................keep dropping my nigg and elevate
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    Aight thanks fam

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