i Can Not belive someone would bite this horrid crap!!!!!!I can't fucking believe you dawg who the fuck you think you fooling I ought to give these people the link to that shit you biting off of sheek damn you whack get a life man wtf is wrong with you like ain't nobody gone figure it out or something I going to spare you this one time but remember I watching you
For get uppin ur skills.. just fuckin shoot your self!
yea now i knoe ya niggas iz hating yea dat was a test jus cause im new yall wanna hate and dat wasent even my flow so i cen tell yall hatin now that was sheek loch lyricks so i know know yall hatin on me on some hard shit cause i took a pro's lyricks and his shit is nice so yall haters besides joey
Originally Posted by Hurricane Game
man.. ur lame.. we bitch cuz ur biting people.. thats not hating.. and for god sake if your going to bite someone.. bite some one whos good.. this guy sucked.
and last.. fuckin talk normal.. i mean mispellin shits cool i cant spell even when i try .. and when rhymin word play is cool.. but your takin the text ebonics a bit too far. i mean i do it a little bit dont ad g to ing a lot.. and other little shit but you doing it evry other word. your trying to hard to be cool.
word GOD...your the truth son....word..
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the only thingdats mashed is ur brain i piss on dat trash
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strucutre was way off tune but the wordplay was ight, wouldnt consider it the best but wasnt the worst lol, elevate on the majority of ya skills n jus keep gettin at it, but manily elevater in for god sakes get that strucutre worked on.
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lol u lettin RB intimadate u...just a test huh...kill that 1 my man...but anyway it does feel like i heard somewhere before especially the line about sittin down to piss I KNOW i heard that 1...but u started out wit a smooth flow...and then u lost me somewhere in the middle...lyrically umm alright u was goin somewhere for a minute but you fell off...maybe if the piece was longer it would have been better...but just keep elevatin doin ya thing and drop somemore dont let ppl intimidate u my man...control yo own music just dont drop stuff so predictable to where cats can say its bitten write about what u want its yo music but just come with different approaches something that stands out from the rest...1
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wut up im new hit it up peace
Im hearin tsunami this, a lil hurricane that,
Natural disaster, but were the ones packin the gat.
From the bay to Iraq, it doesn’t matter where its at,
We're destroying the land and creating corpse stacks.
Its not the world that's killin us but visa versa,
Mother nature never had plans of spreadin a curse on us.
Im droppin bombs, but not weapons of mass destruction,
Spreading evil and corruption, now follow my instruction.
I got heavy utility, spreadin joy and tranquility,
Driven by soul with this God given ability.
This beat is reality, go head and try to battle me
You're not a rattle snake so dont think you can rattle me.
Im not scared to speak the truth the whole truth and nothing but the truth,
So help me God, im reaching out to only you,
For the answers, puttin people in trances,
High on life singin a chorus, intoxicated by dances.
im gonna say DO NOT POST ON THIS SITE UNLESS U HAVE SOMETHING USEFUL OR GOOD TO SAY OR SHOW....THAT SUCKED COMPLETE DICK.......I DONT CARE IF YOU WROTE IT OR NOT....THAT WAS JUST GAY!
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