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    i miss uou by greek chris

    Baby I remanence the days we would just hug and kiss
    Now every single night I cant sleep coz I know you are the one I miss
    Ever since I met you dreading the day you’ll be gone
    Now inside my heart in a million peaces is torn
    Nothing to do now but cry like somebody died and I mourn

    Never could forget all those long nights on the phone
    You was special to me I didn’t want no other bitch to bone
    But now your gone and I sit back and reminisce at home
    I tried making you not leave but the decision was made
    I consumed so mush Henecy hoping this pain will fade
    So afraid that you aint coming back so to god I prayed
    Everyday that goes by without you I wish you stayed
    I cant sleep missing you stabs my heart deep
    Any thug be down for you dun matter if he blood or crip
    I cant take it that your gone you had ma heart and you let it rip
    I dun even think straight never had a love so great
    Without you by my side I begin to contemplate
    What do I do this cant be true your gone does this mean were through
    Was it part of fate or is god just proving hes hate

    Days go pass trying not to think bout it and forget
    But ever since we met had not even one regret
    Baby ill give anything just to see you once more
    Just to feel you kiss you and feel just like before
    How much must I hope to see you walk through my door
    How can I go on with my head facing straight down at the floor
    A love like ours in the world unbeatable for the rest of ma life unforgettable
    Every time we met you gave me this feeling so incredible
    And now your gone and the pain is unbearable
    Baby a love like this would make anyone crazy
    Im so down for you anyone will find it amazing
    Form a player dealer busting on a trigger to faithful
    But no one explained to me that love could be so painful
    Just to see you in front of me is my one last wish
    It might sound selfish to you or even devilish
    But one look at you and ill be satisfied
    Coz my love for you is undenied
    So come back coz life without you gets me horrified

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    theres some spelling mistakes i typed it pretty wuick so just feel me on this one




    UPPING for FEEDBACK!!!!!

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    Uppin For Feed Back Cmon Let Me Know What You Peeps Think

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    this piece was aight from you but there is a lil bit of things that you need to work on.First thing,Try to put more emotion and Imagry in your verse cuz it feels like you rushed this piece.But you had a good structure but try to use some complex wordplay it will make the piece better.But the storyline was ok I was feeling it.But keep up the good work homie you'll get use to it after a while.Check out one of my OMs and leave feedback my newest one is called "current event".

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    yer thanks for the feed back homie ill hit ur thread asap

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