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    An Image in a Frame


    An Image in a Frame


    A solid casing, facing the east, containing a beast
    With metal strips embezzled maintaining the peace
    Holds an image so discrete, its seems scriptures worthless
    Although some human beings see it as a picture perfect
    The surface shimmered as the glass captured a thousand words
    That clearly explained his ways, but remained a clouded birth
    And on the backside was a bar code for identification
    That associated the total of numbers to give it a placement
    Plus, on the other side of the glass and frame, the back was strange
    Look for yourself, hell... the fact remains, it’s to trap - a cage
    Hard as a stone – cold - throwing a scent of something stale
    Empty of visions, representing nothing - jailed
    But people don’t pay attention to that
    They can’t see beyond the scene that’s centered in glass
    So they take it and make it into fiction or fact
    Diction their wrath, and if it’s bad their quick to dish it with trash
    The picture that’s glassed has dimensions restricted to public
    cause if we scoped the whole site, it’d be to sick for our stomach
    But people love it – the picture, the frame
    And depending on the quality, the bigger the change
    Seeing this picture explained a deranged guy
    Off his rocker, staring as the day invade night
    It’s a captured action, that isn’t still, working for pretend dough
    This wasn’t a framed picture, its an inmate, perching on his window
    ...
    An image in a frame, contained by bars, remains gorilla seen
    As he stands gazing the horizon, counting the days until he’s free
    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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    I liked this...decent but I've seen better...I look forward to reading more from you.....You didn't use many multis which made it less exciting but was good topically...Nice drop.....
    If you would..comment on some of mine in my sig...Peace dogg...nice drops again...

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    im not surprised jay. u came dope again like always. u had nice creativity, nice wordplay definitly, and nice imagery. i liked the way u peiced everything together and made everything connect perfectly......word.

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    Thanks, alot, guys.

    Bump.
    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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    Read it, and LEAVE IT!

    Feed, that is...
    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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    ^What he said, yo!!!
    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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    Not out of control dope. But above decent, easily.

    I'll leave decent feed in a little.

    Good job tho. Looking foward to seeing more of your stuff.

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    Word. Thanks. BTW, I dropped a new jawn.
    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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    and another one.
    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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    great flow great structure great everything.. niiice

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    thanks!!!!
    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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