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Thread: Underground

  1. #1
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    Underground

    underground is a thing im puttin on my titles for freestyles

    this freestyle goes out to no one, just sparayin, kinda like emenim did

    STRAIGHT OFF THE DOME

    Im Goin fo dat 2 point conversion
    rollin down south in that black excurssion.
    its the 2005 CRUNK!! version
    blunts burnin
    bitches servin
    candy paint drippin while im swervin
    i got diamonds on my neck i aint payin fo no check
    i got ice on my wrist say hello to my fist.
    u can find me in Miami, in da club drinkin fortys,
    spittin game at the shortys.
    just chillin wit my crew in the VIP room
    doin what eva we wanna do
    we better get out of hurr before someone gets hurt
    dont cry when i say all dis dirt
    gun smoke flyin on my shirt
    u better keep yo bitch around u
    or she'll come wit me and be my boo
    we on I 95 swervin lane to lane
    Cars bein left behind kid its all the same
    keep yo house locked up
    cuz in yo dream u get stuck
    at my house we get CRUNK!!
    while u sit on yo couch like a duck
    every bitch gettin fucked
    and every scrub gettin bucked
    Mother fucker dont front,
    leave me alone with the blunt
    with yo mama and her cunt
    we be on a manhunt
    Ill teach u how to stunt
    and roll a fat blunt
    you ainta real OG.
    u just an mc
    aint nothin similar bout u and me
    My money is green.
    yours is like blood,
    yo shit is a dud.
    I'll be causin a flood,
    your blood spillin all on the rug.
    jump into this hole i dug.
    You'll be 6 feet under,
    ill strike u like thunder,
    hit u like a bumper,
    im so smooth like butter.
    yo gat is like rubber.
    Dont be comin round my territory
    ill scare these niggaz wit every story.
    u got pride i got glory.
    These motha fuckas just bore me.
    Im from the 90 babys,
    i be hittin it wit every lady,
    im wit my homie big shady,
    these mutha fuckaz are lazy.
    the shit u say is all crazy.

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    well you still need to work on your structure, topic was alright, rhymes were much better than your last drop, vocab was pretty weak, complexity wasnt here,man, the flow was choppy, this was aiight, just keeep elevating,man, peace and check out my dig, dont post in them just take a look at em'

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    ight man, precciatte it, keep uppin, need mo tips if anyone has any
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    yo u definetly need tro work on ur structure ur lines were too short aight keep elevatin and ull get there aight homey

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    ight mane, thanks fo the hit, keep uppin yalllllll
    Wins:11
    Losses:8


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