Heres a verse i done earlier. I put quite alot of effort into this piece so appreciate if u jst chek it out.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...08#post3149508
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...743#post3147743
chek it,
I sit alone, silently confined in my dark room,
Inadiquite to speak trapped in this hard coccon,
The walls close in, adapting to a discarded tomb,
One window for parted gloom, headfones strapped on tight,
With a repetitive beat my brain collapses from trite,
Batters my brain for lyrics or for another rap to write,
Perhaps there right, maybe I'll collapse under this heat,
Of this constant spotlight no wonder im sunburnt in defeat,
And sundered from my feet back to plundering on the street,
But I never will fall I will always keep my chin up high,
Never work half harted coz they say the limits da sky,
Or the skys the limit, my brain remains baffled and confused,
My hearts pumpin so fast my veins look trampled on and used,
Stressin each particle in my head, they sampled and refused,
For a handful of words to use, just to make a little sentence,
Going against whats right forced to make a requital repentance,
I aint done nothing wrong im jst desperate to reign in lights,
Commitin my first honest crime with a handgun aimed right,
Towards my brain flashbacks of my framed and blamed life,
Squeeze the trigger ..
.dead................I bet everyone knows my name tonite.
Hope u enjoyed reading.
Feedback plz guys.
Peace
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