Street Life version 2 "collab" (fet/ Vafinest)

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blue= skribble
red= vafinest

chorus x2
street life,the way we live,the way to die
survive,gettin high,no where to hide
Just ride,with your crew,do what you do
desire,hungry for,the lives,we all been through


street life,I live this live countin every single second
of livin on these streets,cuz its always fuckin hectic
we got bloods and crips,I'm cool with some of both
But the life that I live I'm mostly on the blood boat
cuz all my cousins are bloods,and they helped me through the struggle
parents ain't here for me,so I have to do the illegal hustle
taking all these challenges,tryin not to get busted
cuz if I get caught up in the mix,I would be really fustrated
so I think before I do,anything to get in trouble
cuz my rap sheet is so long,my jail time would be doubled
I live my life by the streets,don't give a fuck about anything
cuz round where I live,you will get killed for stupid things
so I watch what I do,and always look behind my back
cuz livin this street life,is about fighting and holding gats

chorus x2

Street life is my life that i live twenty four seven
even when i die, street life is my heaven
i'll live here for life, this is where i be
and dont worry about me i got no I.D
i'm 18 yo, but still drink pretty damn hard
yea.. sum peeps might be thinkin i'm a retard
i fight for my self..fight for my freedom, dont need a guard
i'm strong and have defensive skillz and dont need em'
street life is filled with death all ova da place
I'm gettin paranoid dont look face-to-face
I look for a man holdin a gun and cops
i'm the king of street life bust you out ya sox
i'm very quick and sly like a mutha fuckin fox
but i live in the streets but not in a fuckin box
i got glocks, rocks, and clocks to past the time
and in tha middle of street life i need to rhyme
street life with money and a rubber man
i'm tha real street G, not like the otha man
i'm betta than any T.I, no lie, dont defy
cuz i can survive with no surprise, i'm a real guy

chorus x2

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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=229878
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=229999

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uppin this one

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UPPIN #2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! c'mon dont be lazy, just a few lines on what ya think

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heres my links

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=230543
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=230204

[TheCrunkKing]

i liked it mane,sumhoww i felt krunk in there somtimes,good drop,really liked it mane

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aiight thanks for the feed, uppin for sum more

[Trigon]

aight... i liked the rhyme scheme and the complekity of the rhymes....

keep up the dopeness skrib and va and give feed on my drop...

ALPHABETICAL ASSAULT

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fo sho, thanks and i'll hit up ya thread, uppin

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uppin for feedback

[EyeBite]

yea uppin this one peeps, c'mn leave a lil feed for us gangstaz

[ExPlOsIvE]

This was a nice drop man, topic was original but u dun a very gd job on it, but then i like writin about shit like this. The rhymin was nice and the multis were pretty nice aswell, The flow was nice and easy to read. The wrdplay culd b beta, but it was the type of piece for audio i fely, no1 wnts to hear sum bedazlin wrds in audio like. so i felt u hit bou 8.5/10 bout.

Keep droppin

Peace hit me up on "Time Is Ticking" plz

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did^
and can you hit my other drop up, ALONE, thanks, its not that long so you should read it

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uppin for feedback

[CrazyCarl]

Chorus was alright. Once vafinest's mentioned the bloods in his verse, I tied that to the color of the font, and expected Skribble's to be from the crip side. Vafinest's lines continued to the next, like long sentences. That can get confusing in certain instances, but wasn't the case here. Topic's been done, but if it has relevance to you and readers, you're allowed to voice your opinion. Skribble had a different flow, simple, but switched it up from vafinest's.
Thanks for the nom on my piece.