ait then lets go
10lines
due 20mins afta chek
blind spit
no cru vote
no hate vote
Bruza
Hec-Tik
ait then lets go
10lines
due 20mins afta chek
blind spit
no cru vote
no hate vote
u want me to go first?
yei shoot, i dnt mind
chickety chekkin
sorry i didnt wanna tell u this hectic
your lyrics so browsy your own mum couldnt respect it
next time u tape a rhyme please eject it
cos i know and you know the labels gonna reject it
i take this mic and wreck this
am i just what u expected?
you should killed yourself
instead of gettin us all infected
ill give u time to write ur rhyme but....
why waste time ive got this shit perfected
ait chek
this bitch thinks he a rapper, but he cant hack this
he a pussy eating pimp, he uses his mum 2 practice
i slap this, kind of nigga hu thinks he sick
but we all know bruza just a pet name for his dick
uhard like bricks, lets see how u hold up againt a hammer
ur r just ur word mine are verbs, im truthful 2 my grammar
badly mannerd, u culdnt match me if we were playing pairs
tha only time u go up in tha world is walkin up tha stairs
be prepared, im a heavy weight ur weights just on a cruise
these punches bound 2 leave a mark, u culd call it a bruise
ait lets get sum votes on this pleaz
Uppin 4 \\//otes
sick flows man u actually made me laugh well battled blood
yei safe u had a nice flow
gd battle bruv
votes pleaz
Bruza:
you didn't come off very good
you had no punches..you didn't even
have 10 lines you had to force a lot of what you
were saying..no creativity no anything...get some
battling skills then come back and battle him again..
pz..
Hectik:
you had 10 or 12 lines..and an ok structure
but your creativity wasn't all there..you had some punches
but not very witty one's..you should work on some met's and
be more specific with what your talking about...
V/Hectik
hand's down to more due to more skill
hit the link back..pz......
ait uppin 4 votes
k'mon peeps lets close these battles
uppin 4 votes boys and girls honest verdict please dont hold nuthin back im still learning
oi kmon yall
uppin 4 sum votes on this battle
lets get it closd
uppin for votes please people i need to get sum under my belt
i'll give it to hec. no hate bruza but its pretty clear why, u admit u need work which is all good cos it shows u wanna improve and don't think ur a god or nothin. couple of quick pointers - don't space ur lines and try to make them structurally more even so it flows real nice, u mixed short and long lines which doesn't help rhythmically. punches wise work on really getting at hec, u had a couple of insults but they didn't come off too well. ur opener was pointed but didn't make too much sense or have any real relevence. try working on a concept u can attack him with and using more personals.
hec u came better, having better structure scheme and flow, as well as better punches, altho some were pretty played. the mum's pussy thing was, altho personal, way too familiar. only other thing that got me a lil was that some of ur set up lines seemed forced and irrelevent, like the 'cruise' thing. not a major gripe but it's easily changed. overall u did ok. no hate to either just keep at it.
v/ hec
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