It's London Town

[Irish]

lol, not bad

Didn't expect the end, I'd have to say it was pretty creative. Multies weren't too bad, some didn't make sense but overall if flowed pretty good. Not bad vocab and your imagery was there. I liked the 'breth toxic-waste' line, not bad.


Better than what I'd expected to read. Keep it up.

[Violents]

yo that shit was hot yo yall niggas wileout in London tooo

ayo kiddd nice wordplay, structure was iite and punches hit good

your rhyme scheme was better then most these cats holla at me kep elevatin you hot nigga 1

[The Vortex]

lol..your so thick its funny...

you text slut....peep my audio about london.its 82098302830 times better than this kiddy shit...

eat a dick

fuck you pussy hole

and you claim to be a muslim

fuck u n ur audio bullshit


pussyhole

ghetto man ting

[The Vortex]

i aint hating but that was way to simple man, u coulda described london so much better, u had multies n yea ya flow was aiight but there wunt enuff to it, dint make london seem special or anythin, ive only visited it a cuple times and kno alot of people from there n wat its like n can spit sumthin better than that.

course u hating u dick what else is it about

if u can do better then fukken go ahead i ain stopping u am i?


for fucks sake

uppin this fucker

[Paradox1080p]

you just cant take constructive criticisim


your wack....kill your self....
and your not ghetto bluudddd...

[The Vortex]

stop freeposting in my fucking thread u geek .. fucking muslim suicidal bombing freak u dont know shit