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NCred aka Cyrious
Here we go fam....good luck
....ayo check it
your record is nuthin famz...and to me your just racing to fate..
u trash, so if u on the block that means that sanitation was late
you writting cold, my lines are flamez that'll burn ya skin up
i cant belive you put Iron Man in ya sig, like u Curtis Skinner*
you nevah bag dimez, but i stay on buns like sesame seeds
your lyrics are more boring than a re-run of sesame street!!
why try so hard on the net, when u dont get fame or luxoury?
because just like ya name say, your just a Plain ol' Thug 2 me
i try to teach niggaz like you, but you jus aint a valiant learner
so niggaz like you end up more "WHACK" than an italian murder**
u in a dream, you aint all that, you stay duckin twice like goose***
I'm sprite, you juice, so dont evah tell me that I'm as nice as you
*Curtis Skinner is "Iron Man"'s real name..to all u Marvel virgins
**Italians dont say the "murdered" sumone they say they "whacked" sumone
***Duck Duck Goose...childhood game
NCred aka Cyrious
not to b a punk...but 30 minutes passed famz.......
NCred aka Cyrious
Dis kid's reppin a crew that was closed...Due to da fact it contained noobs
He claims that he's "complex"...But he cant even b compared 2 a rubix cube!
Cant be touched?....Who in da right mind would want to in da first place....
Kid got more noob slots in his crew...Dan a fat guy with the bigget belt waist!
You cant punch me,so what makes you think you can shoot me wit "shellz"
He got more stupidity,than a special ed kid trying to ring the door bellz!!!!
Dis kids a failure at rapping....But hes a failure also to rb and his own crew...
Wen lyrical gangsta left darkcide,it seemed da dope ones did too.................
.................That shows how much your own crew had for you!!!!
Shit i wouldnt expect any diferent form da rest...You should jus no-show...
Last time i raped someone in a battle,it was from ya whole crew...............
...................................Guess now i have to rape 1 more damn ho!.....
The god damn site had diffculties so i couldnt post it....It kep having stupid errors....................And yes dis is a up............
im sayin i understand....but that was 45 minutes famz...and i reported this 5 minutes ago...not to b a bitch but im jus lookin out for me...i hop u dont go arround sayin im a bitch n got u Dqued...cuz the mods prolly wont even pay it any attention...so i wont stress it if polls come in b4 mods get to it
NCred aka Cyrious
dont worry i dont bitch.And i made a mistake on my verse:
*Dis kids a failure at rapping....But hes a failure also to rb and his own crew...
Wen lyrical gangsta left darkcide,it seemed da dope ones did as well.................
.................That shows how much respect your own crew had for you!!!!
shellz-i liked that verse....your opener was tight...your ender was iight...and in the middle it was below average......your punches were ok didnt hit that hard.....but the best punch was.......why try so hard on the net, when u dont get fame or luxoury? because just like ya name say, your just a Plain ol' Thug 2 me.......you flow was iight.....your flow transistion was iight also........your overeall verse was a 8/10
thug- tight assssssssssssss verse....your opener was tight....your ender was tight also...your middle was above average.....your flow was iight...your flow transition was pretty good.....it flowed pretty well from line to line.....your punches were hard ans hit well.....i liked this punch a lot.....Dis kid's reppin a crew that was closed...Due to da fact it contained noobs He claims that he's "complex"...But he cant even b compared 2 a rubix cube!.....overall your verse is a 9.5/10
vote= plain-thug
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Made By Me
Shellz
your record is nuthin famz...and to me your just racing to fate..
u trash, so if u on the block that means that sanitation was late
ok
you writting cold, my lines are flamez that'll burn ya skin up
i cant belive you put Iron Man in ya sig, like u Curtis Skinner*
No
you nevah bag dimez, but i stay on buns like sesame seeds
your lyrics are more boring than a re-run of sesame street!!
ok
why try so hard on the net, when u dont get fame or luxoury?
because just like ya name say, your just a Plain ol' Thug 2 me
no
i try to teach niggaz like you, but you jus aint a valiant learner
so niggaz like you end up more "WHACK" than an italian murder**
ok
u in a dream, you aint all that, you stay duckin twice like goose***
I'm sprite, you juice, so dont evah tell me that I'm as nice as you
*MEH*
ok wordplay punches an personals. I liked the vocab an multis. All i can say is elevate a little more on harder hitting punchlines
Plain-Thug
Dis kid's reppin a crew that was closed...Due to da fact it contained noobs
He claims that he's "complex"...But he cant even b compared 2 a rubix cube!
ok
Cant be touched?....Who in da right mind would want to in da first place....
Kid got more noob slots in his crew...Dan a fat guy with the bigget belt waist!
ok
You cant punch me,so what makes you think you can shoot me wit "shellz"
He got more stupidity,than a special ed kid trying to ring the door bellz!!!!
*meh
Dis kids a failure at rapping....But hes a failure also to rb and his own crew...
Wen lyrical gangsta left darkcide,it seemed da dope ones did too.................
Good
.................That shows how much your own crew had for you!!!!
Shit i wouldnt expect any diferent form da rest...You should jus no-show...
ok
Last time i raped someone in a battle,it was from ya whole crew...............
...................................Guess now i have to rape 1 more damn ho!.....
Dont rhyme
I felt this was a good verse to. Good punches an personals an multis. I didnt like the fact you kept going on an on about hios crew.
v/ Shellz for thoriwing out more wordplay an punches.
no hate
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I've Created A Monster
-Eminem
wow. this was an extremely good battle.
Shellz- good wordplay. good structure. and sum extremely good punches and personals. i really enjoyed this alot. had sum good shit. and the good thing is that u knew ur opponent. that is a always a up side. well done. shit was creative...good vocabluarly. i loved it all. well done. i was xtremely impressed.
Plain-Thug- also well done. structure was good even though it was SO FUCKING SMALL!!! i had to copy and paste it to make it bigger so i cuold read it. lmfao. but really good shit. u also knew ur opponent. giving u an advantage too. sum very nice hits. i really enjoyed this. not as much wordplay but still. well done.
I can't vote but honestly this was so close i'd call it a tie. i ain't gonna say who won because i honestly believe that besides the fact that i don't have 500 posts. this was truly a battle. i enjoyed this alot. just thought i'd tell u that. i respect the both of u. well done.
Link:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=229329
haha I can't vote either...but this was REAALL! close...too close to call in my opinion...both had good punches, and some good wordplay was well...I liked this battle it was hott haha...Anyways...Good battle yo!
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Dope battle both ways,
Shellz - you had a extremely extremely dope battle. this shit was tight. the flow used in this was extremely sick. the punches were hittin the cat and vitals too. the personals you were throwin at him were ill man. the complexity in this was extreme. the creativity was dope. havent seen that shit played before.
Plain thug - you also had a extremely dope battle. the shit was also sick. the flow used in it was pretty dece. minor improvement needed. but its hard to tell in text. the punches were hittin hard and the personals were decent. the complexity was dope. and the creativity too.
this was an extreme battle to vote on but i have to give it to shellz, he came a little harder with the punches wordplay and personals.
v/shellz,
can yall hit up my sig fairly and honestly its gettin mad slept on right now.
The R. -The Illest Ever Kid-
i wrote that Iron Man line b/c he had an Iron Man sig...for those of u who remeber.......upp1
NCred aka Cyrious