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The Do Boy
Plain-Thug
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so it was you man
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when u first posted me i thought you were another newb
but ur plain thug im still ognna melt you like an ice cube
you have nice rhymes i wonder were you bought it
your rhymes they should be censored or on americas most wanted
homie your does your mom know your rhyming against a man
or homie dont play shit like im rollin in style in my mini van
ima killyour rhymes ill make them be outlined in chalk
yo homie your the baby bird and im the hawk
you rhymes whack you should get banned or DQed
dont go in an alias cuz thats weak we're not in pre school
...Pillsbury do boy?It must be frusturating livin a life witout a *dick
Dont know if u even a guy....But wait...Havent i seen u in white chicks?
The way you battle......makes special ed kids look like einstein.....
Seriously man its all the truth..........................................
.....I read ya battles.......But got lost during reading it the 9th time!
You livin in da ghetto?Fuck naw...My names even more damn *Hood
Me suckin ass?....Hell naw.......I even got you saying was mad *good!
You dropped a lil bit too early.....I think u shoulda taken da wole 35...
Ya shit was like a bad"scene"at me...I Lyrically murdered u n had dis live!
10 lines was a good choice...Anymore i woulda made a bad scene.....
Shit ya drop was as bad as foul breath................................
........Too bad there aint nothing to help ya rhymes,like listerene!
*Pills bury bough boy got no dick
*Says he from the hood
*He pmed me on my alias sayin i was good
ma votes fo plain thug
god damn
ur flow was damn good
n the listerine punchline is still makin me laugh
u killed him nasty
u got ma vote
V/plain thug
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Do-Boy
Your structure was real fucked up. Most of ya lines had at least one mistake in em which was annoying as fuck. Your punches lacked originality and they were weak. None of your punches followed through with the set up. Your setup would be about one thing and then your punch would be something completely unrelated. Very bad verse overall, sorry to be honest.
Plain Thug
Nice drop, not as strong hitting as your other ones, but it had better personals. I liked that the most, the personals. You had some decent punches to back em up, but they wasn't as hard hitting though. Very nice wordplay, like the line about 'scene', that was creative. Very nice drop overall, I liked the structure, didn't see any flaws in it.
v/ Plain.
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this battle was ok but my vote goes to plain thug.he came hard with his punches and personals and it really amazed me.Also he had a good structure and really good wordplay.The other guy did ok but I think he could have came with harder punches and personals in his verse.The other guys structure was good but you need to work on your wordplay.Both of yall did good in this battle but I think do boy could have done better but my vote goes to plain thug
vote plain thug
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I'm afraid to say i think that do boy was outclassed here. Plain thug had some pretty good punches, whereas Do boy didn't really have any. Plain thug also had a better flow and strucutre, although it was stretched in some places. In terms of wordplay, plain thug once again did better, especially with the listerine line. Overall, Plain Thug came a lot harder.
Plain Thug: All you really need to do is practice and improve your structure. With time, your punches will get better as you find out what works and what doesn't.
Do Boy: What I'd work on first is general punches and the like. Try and look through plenty of other battles to see what people think is good, and try and learn from it. From there, improve your general structure. With time you'll get better.
Overall: Plain Thug got this easily. He had better punches, and a nicer verse in general.
I'm surprised they didn't delete me ages ago...
...........Eat Shit and Die!
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............:vanja:
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10 lines was a good choice...Anymore i woulda made a bad scene.....
Shit ya drop was as bad as foul breath................................
........Too bad there aint nothing to help ya rhymes,like listerene!
the do boy had a weak verse. weak punches, wack flow, n wack structure. not much complexity, n weak use of vocab. plain thug actually attempted punches, and came stronger, you also came more consistent..
v. plain
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