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snorrreee....yah i'm checkin in. 40 min start now.
i think that crucial times will win
"Crucial" i plan to "Lyrically/Seriously" bruise and abuse you
Ur "Times" run short, as a "Bad Comedian" and a "Tu-Tu"
Ur an "unwanted artist", only one relating is "Lil Zane"
U could numb my punches with "Novacane" u'd still feel the pain
Quickly Iam aimin at record 2-0, begging ppl to vote...so
As ur wordplay, fails on a "large scale",we see and it shows whos the hoe
Practically u battled herbs whos words and verbs were unheard
As i "Drastically Alter" ur "Lost Category" ur gettin "Buttfuck'd" by this bird
"Crucially", ur rhyming and word-scheme need to elevate
Iam on a "Merk Mission", and "X" marks the "HerbMate"
Iam handing u a gift to make-up ur "Be-lated Birthday"
As ur "concious sways", iam leaving u helpless at ur "dis-may"
Iam battlin this "Limp-Dick", he couldnt "sow" a win as a "Seamstress"
So peep this, and watch him crumble like, "Kathy-Lee and Regis"
"Procrastinate" please, as u get "exterminated" with great ease
"The Noble Prize" is mine,as i "terminated" the source of "Herb-Disease"
Your verse in your sig is horrible, please don't drop like that
Keep droppin wack and Bow Wow will look better than that crap
Do u mean urself cuz there isn't a dam decent personal in this dropOriginally Posted by Fem-Fatale
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=227731
Is that ur best punch is callin me a pussy when ur the female-bitch
In every post i read of urs, your cussin like Eminem yellin at-Kim
In the title of this battle, you spelled both names wrong-"basterd"
Your stupider than blondie Jessica Simpson from Dukes of-Hazard
Maybe ur creative, but its off topic, bouncin off like Arcade's-Curve-Ball
You act like your the biggest thing eva, but ur smaller than a-smurf's-tall
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=229325
check this^^^
First post and you say "rules-here.............................................. "
I challenge you and u say my rules, looks like u lost thought-there
Fuck it, i thought u were supposed to be a challenge, what a waste-o-time
I don't even gota try, you "fate" was fucked when you pasted-those-rhymes
ummm butt-fucked by a bird?
wateva....umm ok drop. wierd but ok.
g/l
Uppin #1.
fatale- that was pretty good.....your opener and ender were both pretty good.....in the middle it was iight could have been better.....your flow was pretty good but your floow transistion was bad....your punches were iight....but i liked this one......"Crucially", ur rhyming and word-scheme need to elevate I am on a "Merk Mission", and "X" marks the "HerbMate".......also you need to stop tha self glory .......overall=8.5/10
crucial- that was goood i liked that verse......your opener was tight....your ender was pretty good also.....you middle was better than fematles.....you flow was good and you flow transition was good also....your punches hit pretty hard i liked this punch a lot........Fuck it, i thought u were supposed to be a challenge, what a waste-o-time
I don't even gota try, you "fate" was fucked when you pasted-those-rhymes.....overall you verse is a 9/10
vote=crucial
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Made By Me
Pre-written vs. Personals....
Fem Fatale
Pretty nice drop, I liked some of the punches for their wordplay. Your flow wasn't off either so good shit wit the flow. Now to the bad part; You had a pre-written verse. Your idea of a personal was just to throw his name in there and hope it applies to him. I hated that structure that u used with the whole BOLD wording. You don't need to emphasize those parts of the punch, they should be self-explanatory. Like I said before, some punches were decent cuz of their wordplay, but the others were the complete opposite. They were corny, like the one Be-lated birthday. You used some of the rhyme schemes for too long, you shoulda just used it for two lines.
Crucial
Nice drop, I especially like the personals. Liked how u used those quotes against her. And not only did u have the nice personals, but u had the punches to back it up. Not too much wordplay, but u didn't need it with all the wordplay you had. Didn't like the structure in just two parts, but other than that it was blazin throughout.
v/Crucial for personals.
u dont understand NON OF IT WAS PRE WRITTEN HE CHEATED AND SAID IT WAS TO GET VOTES...HIS WAS...
Pre-Written rhymes wont get oyu anywhere on this site...So bettah luck comin wit somethin fresh next time... Crucial good flow and structure. you through some good personals at her...good battle dawg...not hatin just callin it like I see it...Vote Crucial, but I cant vote yet..
Have the chance hit these up...be real wit what you say and how you vote i dont take shit personal
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=229017
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=229133
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=229042
Fem-Fatale
"Crucial" i plan to "Lyrically/Seriously" bruise and abuse you
Ur "Times" run short, as a "Bad Comedian" and a "Tu-Tu"
ok
Ur an "unwanted artist", only one relating is "Lil Zane"
U could numb my punches with "Novacane" u'd still feel the pain
* Meh
Quickly Iam aimin at record 2-0, begging ppl to vote...so
As ur wordplay, fails on a "large scale",we see and it shows whos the hoe
No
Practically u battled herbs whos words and verbs were unheard
As i "Drastically Alter" ur "Lost Category" ur gettin "Buttfuck'd" by this bird
WTF?
"Crucially", ur rhyming and word-scheme need to elevate
Iam on a "Merk Mission", and "X" marks the "HerbMate"
No
Iam handing u a gift to make-up ur "Be-lated Birthday"
As ur "concious sways", iam leaving u helpless at ur "dis-may"
No
Iam battlin this "Limp-Dick", he couldnt "sow" a win as a "Seamstress"
So peep this, and watch him crumble like, "Kathy-Lee and Regis"
ok
"Procrastinate" please, as u get "exterminated" with great ease
"The Noble Prize" is mine,as i "terminated" the source of "Herb-Disease
ok lol
Your verse was ok. Punches were okay. You had no personals. Flow was good. You didnt make sense in some of your rhymes. Nice multis too. Elevate a little more
Crucial Times
Is that ur best punch is callin me a pussy when ur the female-bitch
In every post i read of urs, your cussin like Eminem yellin at-Kim
Dont Rhyme
In the title of this battle, you spelled both names wrong-"basterd"
Your stupider than blondie Jessica Simpson from Dukes of-Hazard
*meh
Maybe ur creative, but its off topic, bouncin off like Arcade's-Curve-Ball
You act like your the biggest thing eva, but ur smaller than a-smurf's-tall
ok
First post and you say "rules-here.............................................. "
I challenge you and u say my rules, looks like u lost thought-there
Huh?
Fuck it, i thought u were supposed to be a challenge, what a waste-o-time
I don't even gota try, you "fate" was fucked when you pasted-those-rhymes
Good
Good verse. Punches an personals were good. Could have done better with vocab an multis. This was over all a close battle
BreakDown
Punches- Fem
Personals- Crucial
Flow-Tie
Strucutre-Tie
Wordplay- Crucial
opener- Fem
closure- Crucial
creativity- Tie
Complexity- Tie
Multis- Fem
Metaphors- Crucial
v/ Crucial for coming with hard personals an proof to back it up
This was a close battle no hate to Fem. I just felt punches arent the only thing you need in a battle you have to have a mixture of everything, an crucial had the punches an personals why you only had the punches.
no hate
I never prewrite. and i proved that by turning ur quotes on you. wateva. uppin. couple more votes and this shit is closed. leave links and i'll get to em.
Fem - I liked your verse. some extremem punches. the flow was tight. the complexity in your verse was alright needed minor improvement, the creativity was tight. the personals needed huge improvement, cause there were not really many in there. the rhyme scheme was tight also. out of ten 8.5
Vs.
Crucial - you had also a pretty dece verse. the flow was alright. the structure was decent also. the complexity in your piece also needed elevation. the creativity was decent minor elevation needed to make it. the rhymescheme was pretty simple. out of ten 8
V/fem
Can yall drop an honest and fair vote in my sig.
The R. -The Illest Ever Kid-
Crucial had more personals but Fem, u did ya thing..
V/Crucial
Vote on mine Fairly like i did this one:
Me vs. Lil Mista : http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=229366
me Vs. SexxiMotha: :http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=229227
Please Vote.... Holla @ Me
Upping #3. one more vote and this shit is closed.
Drop links. I'll get at em as soon as possible.
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