Maxwell905 vs @$$@$!N4H!RE

[@$$@$!N4H!RE]

10-20 lines
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20 minutes to drop

maxwell905

[Maxwell905]

checkin in remember u go first...

[@$$@$!N4H!RE]

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Wit lyrics like yours your gonna stay on da 1st floor,
if I was u I'd just creep out the backdoor,
Where u get those lyrics anyways? The Dollar Store.
Hmm I didnt know they accepted food stamps anymore.
Maxwell u probably think u a hustla,
Must be a broke one cuz you wearin jeans made by Rustler. (wal-mart brand)
U should just try a different a approach,
better yet just go get a lyrics coach.
Nah fuck that just go ahead and retire,
Just get out the game cuz your rhymes takin u as many places as a car wit a flat tire.
heard there havin auditions for the all boys chior,
now come on man lil boys is what u really desire.
Man u just anotha nigga merked by the @$$@$!N4H!RE.

[@$$@$!N4H!RE]

yo son 5 mintues left to spit ya shit................

[Maxwell905]

from $outh$side bitch ur probably uptown wanna-be
creep around the back i come in front so all can see
think ur a soldier ya cuz bitch u do what ur told
i'm a luitenent with stars and strips i hold
newbie in the game just tryin to inprove my rap
i asked for a challenge how u gonna give me crap
get ur head out the bowl take a in-hale fresh air
Woooooo feel the lines chop like my ass was Ric Flair
how the fuck u no rustler was a wal mart brand?
cuz u shop there every day leave with tons of bags in ur hand
now understand don't get it twisted my lines may be from the dollar store
but u give head for a dollar cuz u a fuckin whore
the cost off my shoes alone is enuff to get u killed
u lines are weak but mines are just starting to build
it's sink or swim time and ur tied to a rock wit cement shoes
think ur bad it's time for u to pay ur dues
i can hear ur heart beat over my internet connection
ur girls pissed off cuz u can't get an errection
that's why she come to me say uh uh just like tray songz
trying to battle me that was just plan wrong

[Maxwell905]

sorry that i was late had sometin to do

[@$$@$!N4H!RE]

that was good even though u had to use alot of my shit.......good luck dawg.....^^^^^4votes

[Maxwell905]

thanks i guess ur was good to when i go first ppl usally use my stuff this is my first time goin second so i used ur stuff against u is that wrong? who can say? who can say? lol

[@$$@$!N4H!RE]

^^^^^^^^4votes.....keep it real wit what u say and how you vote...i dont take shit personal

[@$$@$!N4H!RE]

uppin 4 votes...............lets gets some votes man......keep it real wit what you say and how you vote...i dont take shit personal..

[@$$@$!N4H!RE]

uppin 4 votes...............lets gets some votes man......keep it real wit what you say and how you vote...i dont take shit personal..

[@$$@$!N4H!RE]

^^^^^^^4some votes...keep it real wit what you say and how you vote i dont take shit personal

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=229017
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=229133
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=229042

[@$$@$!N4H!RE]

^^^^^^^4votes....keep it real wit wut you say and how you vote

[D-Boy]

yo @$$ got dis
he had a more constant flow and a couple good punches
i liked the one
"Where u get those lyrics anyways? The Dollar Store.
Hmm I didnt know they accepted food stamps anymore."
dat was fuckin hilarious overall you had da punches in this battle
maxwell fed of his verse and it still wasnt on @$$'s level
da creativity and structure were both @$$ in this aswell

vote @$$@$!N4H!RE for overall better verse

[FL- Reporter]

Rb Rule
2.IF YOU UP YOUR THREAD MORE THAN 5 TIMES YOU WILL BE DQ'd.
An "up" is any post made after both verses are up.

@$$@$!N4H!RE-You exceeded your "upping" battle limit first.
Which results in your disqualification.
Maxwell905-wins the match due to this.
Polls will be converted by a mod'.

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