a lil hostile..

[..Meta..]

I advance with several celestial sword "SWINGIN HORSEMEN"//
Projecting blasphemous satanic chapters in fractions "TOWARDS MEN"//

Leave ur physical figure disfigured in ritualistic "SYMBOLS OF ART"//
"RIP YOU APART" with encrypted lyrics that'll "CRIPPLE YOUR HEART"//

split u in half with sadistic methods "DEVELOPED IN DARKNESS"//
leave u impaled on a crucifix and laugh at the "SWELL OF UR CARCASS"//

render u senseless, tear the thoughts in ur "HEAD IN TWO"..."DISMEMBER U"//
with venomous testaments, heavenly "SENT TO U"//

remove ur "SPINAL CORD" with a "VILE SWOARD" and a "PRIMAL ROAR"//
pierce ur spleen and make ur "BILE POUR" in the feast of this "TRIBAL WAR"//

rip ur `mind in four` and shatter ur "FRAME IN SIX WAYS" then "TAKE A SWITCH-BLADE"//
and engrave my "NAME IN UR RIB-CAGE"//

extract what matters with methods from "HERETICAL TOMES"//
strip the "FLESH FROM UR DOME" and then shatter what's "LEFT OF UR BONES"//

bring u `death from the throne`, have u approaching "RIGGOR MORTIS"//
my "TRIGGER FORCE IS" so precise it'll leave ur "LIPIDS SORTED"//

u `twisted portions` of creation are just a "FALLACY TO RAP"//
and ur "MENTALITY IS FLAT" when I make ur "GALAXIES COLLAPSE"//

throw ur planets out of orbit and "DISTORT UR SOLAR SYSTEM"//
blast ur dust through nebular clusters and "ABORT UR WHOLE EXISTANCE"//

I thrust mystic fists into ur mentals equipped with "SCRIPTURES OF OLD"//
and leave the inner walls of ur skull with my name "ENSCRIPTED IN GOLD"//

[Aashes]

That was hot, dawg

P.S. U SERIOUSLY need counseling u crazy bastard, lol

[..Meta..]

haha thanx for droppin ur feedback homie... haha been waitin to see what ppl might say haha...

[..Meta..]

uppin for feedback

[maja flava]

yo that was some killer shit rite there. ill feel bad for whoever kid you battle. lol. but youz creative wit ur word play, nice vocabulary, and haha knew your science. these types of lyrics were what i was tryin to find in this website. hehe, well keep it up man, ya got skillz. if ya gonna make a song or track, holla at me so i can have a listen. peace

[conquistador]

I ain't deep enough to appreciate ya flow. You are too complex for me. I was confused and I didn't follow you...if you want me to feel ya shit then you gotta be more clear and less vague. I guess you need to put down the dictionary...you good though ...just not my type.

[Trema]

firstly smallen the font size ayt,

This was pretty good, um feeling what the dude above me said it was a lil complex but thats what gives it style and your vocab was good. I got a lil confused in some places but overall it was good for real. piece

[shadows]

yo its was cool to know nice way to use font and something really unique

[warchild]

Im an arrogant bastard but i'll give you props for this one, your the second sickest psycho on this board after me your flow was nice.
The imagery was really graphic so i was feeling it i just think next time you write a piece tone the vocab down a lot of your bars were too cryptic you have to break em down. Im not saying go basic but make your rhymes more easy to understand to the average person you'll get better feed that way.

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