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    chronic_beats
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    behind bars

    you can't stop my flow its linked together like a golden chain,
    i melt through shit with my lyrics like my name is acid rain,
    you gonna need some gain! to get out that blood stain,
    niggas try to shoot me up cuz im movin bricks of cocaine,
    but i still got it by the airport custom,
    cops roll by lookin for niggas and a reason to bust em,
    some faggets roll with cops but nigga i don't trust em,
    this the story about how a rat nigga get killed,
    they payin for the funeral so now his family gettin billed.
    how i got caught it was a huge ass list,
    this is all what made them cops pissed,
    the first one was obvious it was drug dealin,
    the second wasn't so bad it was money luandering and stealin,
    terrorist attacks like i was blowin off the ceilin,
    rat ass niggas thats what i was killin


    alright step outta sight,
    cuz im rollin with them guns!! tht will give a nigga a fright,
    cuz if u walkin the streets at night,
    rollin with cops like a rat ass might,
    no one will see ya when it come daylight,
    cops outside my door waitin for someone to be chirpin,
    but round in this ghetto no body be lerkin,
    grab my shotti one shot will have my arm jerkin,
    send that pig back 10 feet from my house,
    stepped on the wrong door mat he was supposed to be silent as a mouse,
    bustin through my back door screamin this is a raid,
    look out my front door screamin in agony!! looks like that man paid,
    every night thinkin bout how his blood spilt,
    ill be livin every day of my life with this guilt,
    fuck it at least i got that fagget ass rat,
    i sent him to the land thats far in other words heaven
    im livin my life behind bars niggas is treatin me like the terrorists from nine 11

  2. #2
    chronic_beats
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    its not the best its just some shit from on the spot not my best but i like it

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    I thought this was okay, it flowed really smooth, but you got a bit off topic every now and again, and then brought it back. The first verse was the better of the two I thought, but for what it was – I liked this. It wasn’t bad. You’ve got potential. Keep posting.
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