Ima crush Deniable till his particles break, put a mic in his hand and watch him harlem shake/
he rantin, ravin, naggin and bitchin, till someone drop his body off in hells kitchen/
but, ill give you props you aint bitchin cuz ya not the champ/
the reason why you bitchin is from menstrul cramps/
VS.
Rock man should be rock boy still cant translate what hes thinking
your other word rock thats the reason why your carrers sinking
your from "alabama"* now ima make his "home"* not so "sweet"*
i dont need my niggaz to crew battle cuz this is a eazy defeat
youve already got 1 loss and you've barely had 2 battles
Rock - your verse was decent. minor improvement needed in all areas to perfect it though. the flow was decent. punches were hitting but not to hard. more on the soft side. the complexity needed improvement to overcome deniables. 6/10
Deniable - your verse was decent also. minor improvement in some areas to perfect it, the complexity needed minor elevation. the flow was dope. the punches were hittin but needed a minor elevation in there man. out of ten. 7.5/10
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