15 lines
5 votes end it
15 lines
5 votes end it
oh no here i go wit my flow
ive only just begun , im the one to let y'all know
U think u know , but u dont know , ok? ur like a job with no pay ,
insane, i work all day , and i slave ,and i crave some pills for the pain , i stand out in the rain and take the a train to pick up a brick form my man jermaine, I'll take it back on a plane and distibute the shit to my bitches at KEAN
I got a deathwish,a wishlist and a checklist of stuff i need to take to stay sane.
All i want to do is complain and constrain and contain all the joy that i feel when i damage
my brain wit toxins, narcotics,gas fumes and some bong hits,i break shit and grab tits, and
throw fits and stab kids.U kno im the best , i shoot off like a tec h, just one final question; U feelin me yet ?
You got to be joking.... I don't even wanna rap no more...
but just to be nice... I'll rip you for bordom sake. whoa.
15.
You seem gayer than children, maybe a simple weak male
not an R. Kelly, but your intentions seem a~little~female
You couldn't be original, or "the real thing" like bottles of Pepsi
is this fag treading water? or is he just a model on jet skiis?
Battle my mind in the flesh, the wounds will make you fear it
if I was a "ghost"writer, I'll probably be breaking your "spirits"
The wackest verse ever written, you virgin... I'd still kill you
voters might as well all be female, cause they won't feel you
Sike. 8 just cuz I hate your verse.
Keep talkin about pepsi pussy
too many chicks have been known to feel me/
but this isnt even a question of my sexuality
this isnt a battle cuz u lost auto maticly/
when u brought up ghost writer and that bitch r. kelly/
ur ryhmes belong wit those two things tho , im tellin u man
all three of them are shits people wont ever mention again/
i guess i must be jokin cuz im hearin all that laughin/
or maybe thats the sound of girlfriend gasping
when i monixide her room wit this hose i m grabbing/
wit each breath shes graspin to hold on
ASprin/ is the only thing thats gonna help me if i have hear any more of ur punk pussy battle rappin/
cmon dawg lets hear it while im still young
ummm... ok... whut the heck.
Trash you fast, in the very places I stash fools last
to be blunt, all I have to do... is rap you and pass
Dropping with speed, making your dome collapse
you moved so fast, your feats kicked your own ass
Beat you with soap, guess I'm at the end of my rope
forget about drug abuse, since ur rhyme is not dope
This little snott's broke... as I obviously hore him
his I.D. will be uncovered, when I rip off his foreskin
This kid is unaware this is the beginning of his fall
his spit would hit harder, if it didn't drip off his balls
Wackness is what you practice, ain't been in it long
like that J-Lo freak, you definitely Ben~shitted~on
~take ur self to WAC
Last edited by R.Ocalot; February 25th, 2003 at 08:18 AM
and what the heck are you doing... this ain't no rap~a~thon.
the verses was dropped... that means it's time to vote. k?
uppin...
sorry didnt mean to wear u out wit my rap a thon boy , get these freaks to vote rite now and we ll see who won this shit -
lmao@ dude dropping a SECOND verse.
look Cash...you're obviously a newbie at this, so lemme give you some advice. ya first verse wasn't even close to being a battle rhyme. you didn't talk about your opponent even ONCE. the goal of a battle is to make the opposition look dumb, not make yaself look good. so you did a lil better in ya second verse. but it was too late. you already lost the first one...which is the one we're voting on, i'm assuming.
Silence: feelin' ya verse. but for some reason, i'm under the impression that this wasn't ya best work. seemed like you did just enuff to win. which is cool...cuz i don't like to waste really nice lines on battles i know i've won either. so i'll expect a lil better from you in ya next battle...but this verse was pretty decent.
VOTE: ~Silence~ easily
Eh... Same as dat guy said
Vote = Silence
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vote: silence
get cash you had nice multis but i wasnt really feelin ya punches
CLosed
Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it
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