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Plain-Thug
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iight check ......goodluck........................
You suck....But you hide your record just like a halloween mask
If given da answers to a test....He still wouldnt complete that task!
C'mon man..........Do you honestly believe your really good cuz?
Its good that you think your dope....But really no one else does!
Ever since soultakingmafia was dead.......You havent had a crew
Even if they made a crew that excepted noobs...Still wouldnt have you!
You've been here as long as me...Diference is dat no1 noes u alive
You couldnt "stick" to da topic....Even if you were in a bee-hive!
Dawg seriously...U've been here as long as alot of peeps,jus quit
U've been a mid. weight for weeks!...Yet havent accomplished shit!!!
I know you beat vets only by dq's....So just stop thinkin u da best
Shit dis kid's like my rb fan...Cuz most of his battles had my style and text!
this bitch needs to get his weight up, claimin he phat
but came across ethiopian, with those whack raps he craft
so please hurry doctor we need 50 cc's of ghost written similies stat
pump him with the IV its an emergency,his rhymes malnourished & its a fact
that my intricite futuristic lyrics, make urs look like ancient artifacts
by comparison, bcuz like neglected hitchhikers im miles past him
in fact im light years ahead, but returned just to embarrass him
cuz ur futile rhymes are unoriginal......hence the name plain
your style is broken down like mary jane, than verbally slain
u from....... coulda swore u stayed in "colons",make up ur mind*
becuz u claimin u a fuckin thug,but u aint throwin up them signs
the closest youll come is regurgatatin them same played-out rhymes
* it just has a bunch of periods where it says from under his name
and colons are another type of puncuation, so it has a double meaning*
Uppin for votes....Dont vote if you dont understand.......
both of u had a similar kind of flow
dutch master had better wordpla
but what this one rly comes down to is the punches
and i feel that plain thug had hardder punches then dutchmaster
this was a close battle
but my overall vote goes to plain thug
and dont forget to vote on
do boy vs. two
do boy vs. soul-jjah
yo my vote is dutch
no offence but plain thug stepp up ya game evan if u want to battle m crew and your scared cuz u suk
pretty good battle. liked palin-thug's structure and flow......and dutchmaster came weak. so......my vote goes to plain for way stronger punchlines and a better structure. but both are weak and need to elevate.
v//plain
plain thug did good but could of came harder and didn't really need to when it came to rippin plain thug newayz......so ma vote goes to plain thug for having harder hitting punches and wordplay and an overall more decent verse.....dutch master needs to elevate but both had an aight verse..peace.
vote-plain thug
vote on ma battle here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=225904
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yo this was a close battle
dutchmaster pawned plain thug in vocab however plain tied him in wordplay, plain pawned dutch in punches cuz they hit hard and were constant and flo was about a tie aswell but in the end, plain had a more batlesc style and punches make the battle complete and he took that so vote
v/ plain thug
You suck....But you hide your record just like a halloween mask
If given da answers to a test....He still wouldnt complete that task!
^^simple diss - try and come with more SURPRISING stuff, you know, stuff the reader doesn't expect. And wittier
C'mon man..........Do you honestly believe your really good cuz?
Its good that you think your dope....But really no one else does!
^^a played concept, simple diss
Ever since soultakingmafia was dead.......You havent had a crew
Even if they made a crew that excepted noobs...Still wouldnt have you!
^^simple
You've been here as long as me...Diference is dat no1 noes u alive
You couldnt "stick" to da topic....Even if you were in a bee-hive!
^^ok
Dawg seriously...U've been here as long as alot of peeps,jus quit
U've been a mid. weight for weeks!...Yet havent accomplished shit!!!
^^eh post count doesn't mean much. Again, no wordplay or anything here
I know you beat vets only by dq's....So just stop thinkin u da best
Shit dis kid's like my rb fan...Cuz most of his battles had my style and text!
^^okish, but slightly self glory
advice: read battles in LLL JR and LLL to elevate
vs.
this bitch needs to get his weight up, claimin he phat
but came across ethiopian, with those whack raps he craft
^^simple
so please hurry doctor we need 50 cc's of ghost written similies stat
pump him with the IV its an emergency,his rhymes malnourished & its a fact
^^simple diss
that my intricite futuristic lyrics, make urs look like ancient artifacts
by comparison, bcuz like neglected hitchhikers im miles past him
^^okish, but self glory
in fact im light years ahead, but returned just to embarrass him
cuz ur futile rhymes are unoriginal......hence the name plain
^^nah, played
your style is broken down like mary jane, than verbally slain
u from....... coulda swore u stayed in "colons",make up ur mind*
^^lol, no
becuz u claimin u a fuckin thug,but u aint throwin up them signs
the closest youll come is regurgatatin them same played-out rhymes
^^nice try, but didn't word it right for it to hit
plain thug came very....err plain, heh, but he stuck to dissing. Seriously man read some vet battles to know what I mean, by coming wittier.
v/plain thug
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