Death in a casket

[deathtoll]

Constantly watching-my-back, trust, don’t ask-me-for-that
I got my ass-in-the-black, come into the light and get stabbed-in-the-back
Alter egos, false identities…more-to-the-eye
From when I’m born-till-I-die, a lifetime of boredom-from-lies
“I couldn’t help myself” when you don’t like the choices-you-make
Real till I fall-to-my-grave because of poison-from-snakes
Celibacy so you don’t mess-with-my-brain, I’m depressed-in-my-veins
Friends? Don’t mention-my-name, roll deep be destined-for-pain
Foul bitches I don’t need-in-my-fam, greed-is-in-man
Pour my heart through my pen and bleed-from-my-hands
I’m cold, don’t know how love-is-done, friendship is stupid and trust-is-dumb
Feeling of belonging is like smoking in a puff-its-gone
This world-is-wack, I could fit in every herd-and-pack
But go too deep and they all turn-their-backs, so I return-to-rap
All friends-are-just-foes, a world where fitting in depends-on-your-clothes
Closeness in a world where we are meant-to-appose
So get-ya-back-slit, the second-ya-past-it, its death-in-a-casket
Having a deep fam is like having too many eggs-in-the-basket

[liam]

i ante being weired or nuffin but are u gay do u like watchin eminem play with his nuts

[ShOcK jErZeE]

Yo i like this...... Yo used alot of multis nshit .... i feel wat your saying to..... real life shit.....keep em comin

[deathtoll]

Originally posted by liam
i ante being weired or nuffin but are u gay do u like watchin eminem play with his nuts

shut the fuck up you little punk....the fuck out of my thread if you aint got any sensible feedback on my shit

[Dirty Shanks]

Yeh sometimes you get fags like that, that come in ya threads and talk shit. You could rip him with a open mic verse in a battle so don't sweat these hurds dawgie. I'm sure you know tha dill on kats like that back at Rap Cityz board, right? Well ya spit is off tha hook dawg, I enjoyed ya flow and it was a very nice read with definate skill. Keep it up and kats will show there respects, cause ya not a fuckin' hurbish assed bitch wannabe emcee like some of these kidds that roll through here flippin' tounge so keep it up. You battle anymore, wit text or nah? if so hit up my crew O.N.E. ok....peace dawgie


OuTtIe

[deathtoll]

yeah dawg, im used to faggots like him...they just piss me off....

thanks for your feedback. i do topical battles regularly. i stopped doing regular text battles but some mad beef at rap cityz has got me battlin again...........

wait till i battle here, then holla if you like what you see

[deathtoll]

uppin this....

[wrecklessness]

i feel everythin your sayin...friends are fucked....lifes fucked man thats just the way its goes...and im really feelin all the shit you gotta say...i can read it and feel the beat without any music...keep your shit bumpin cause right now im feelin what you gotta say...