Sheer Boredome...

[T-Square]

I'm bored as fuck, I feel like I'm waistin my time,
Maybe I'll commit a crime, to lazy so I write a rhyme/
Left myself speachless like a mime or blown up like minez
In tha distance a bitch wines, Beat by man wit no spine/
Hes jus slime, an putrid bullshit thats ruinin this earth,
For what its worth, I wish I woulda stayed flatlined
on my date of birth, But gotta leave my past behind/
I'm sick of reppin only not havin any reputation,
An I'm tired of my own ignorance placen situations/
That are complicatons that get myself hatin/
Waitin for tha storm cause the eye is calm/
But a hurricane is comin from tha center of my palm/
An tha futures read to me but tha teller speak islam/
So I translate, an reawake in a cold sweat again/
Another nightmare but somehow I was listenin/
I'm in too deep but tha shits still thickening/
Headed for death even in my dreams it seems,
I walk around depressed, Co-workers say I'm mean/
I need a breakthrough like 3 inch cracks in floors/
But instead I choose to grab a pen an write some more//
Cause no matter the outcome of dreams, I'm still bored////

One...

[LaRyan Shabaz]

I liked this BS.

In tha distance a bitch wines, Beat by man wit no spine/
Hes jus slime, an putrid bullshit thats ruinin this earth,
For what its worth, I wish I woulda stayed flatlined
on my date of birth, But gotta leave my past behind/
I'm sick of reppin only not havin any reputation,

I like the social commentary and self-depreciation.
Too used to middle schoolers talk about how bad-ass they are, and the gats they read about.
You're good with flow, as usual.

[Sonny Blac]

this was coo,simple rhyme scheme to it..so it was so-so..keep elivatin..


~beenghost~

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