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10 lines.
Blind spit.
Due 30 min. after check in.
House rules.
Check... stop bitching
huh
This bitch tries to switch names, it's obvious he's been bruised in bouts
Noncha1ant? ....................Cloggin' up Rb with wack user accounts
Damage T's structure, like Mel's a vandal with blueprints
Your thoughts are worthless...
....we could give a fuck about ya two sense
Continue with rude hints, cuz merking herbs like him makes my pen tire
I've questioned his skills, second guessed his religion....
.....your punches? I still in choir
Yep a blended liar, hiding behind a number of aliases, you slack enough to me
I heard you drop dope..........................but it ain't what it's cracked up to be
I've rarely seen something quotable from you, who could you please nerd
S'why I'm irritating this vegetable...
...cuz Tease a herb
huh
Up for him to drop...
huh
dude just drop...
huh
^Stop battling nobodies, you are and can be so much better than this
Oh and MeL, Windsors better than Detroit
lmao... just something I did cuz I was bored
Detroit is better than Windsor
Mods excuse the freeposts sorry
huh
ch check!
watch me smoke this kid quick, betta get outta this joint
cuz my frees will put him way below, his own melting point
the Key is you suck, ill run Motor city and Drive em
cuz im Pis(t)sin on this dude, you aint good stop Lion
funny how you embarass ya self, i guess you can say you have one skill
but hes just Plain, thats why hes ridin First Class to wackville
you know you dont gain from battlin noobs, for example your self
so Read that Line from schiz' Book, maybe youll even get off the Shelf
he aint got a Strong Line, but yet he hangin off me like a Rope
when i put ya name in my verse...
...thats the only time you looked dope
read the whole thread, avy's and shit to understand
up 1
Uppin...
huh
up 2
up 3, leave links and ill git at it.
good battle this read both yall rhymes a few times before i could decide my vote.
when i read melin points thought hed won before i even read totwoo's but twos punches seemed to hit harder an i felt it abit more. altho i think meltin points flowed a lil better with more vocab.
neway v/ totwotoo for bigger punches and i liked the last line.
This bitch tries to switch names, it's obvious he's been bruised in bouts
Noncha1ant? ....................Cloggin' up Rb with wack user accounts
ok opener, nothin big
Damage T's structure, like Mel's a vandal with blueprints
Your thoughts are worthless...
....we could give a fuck about ya two sense
shitty
Continue with rude hints, cuz merking herbs like him makes my pen tire
I've questioned his skills, second guessed his religion....
.....your punches? I still in choir
meh, iight
Yep a blended liar, hiding behind a number of aliases, you slack enough to me
I heard you drop dope..........................but it ain't what it's cracked up to be
pretty good
I've rarely seen something quotable from you, who could you please nerd
S'why I'm irritating this vegetable...
...cuz Tease a herb
shitty closer
well mel you had no good punches that i liked in your verse. most of them were kinda weak and didn't really come 2 hard at all. u fuckin need a new structure men, cuz that one sucks. i hate that structure. need better wordin in ur verse and creativity 2. personals ill give 2 that they were ok 2. just work on harder punches.
vs.
watch me smoke this kid quick, betta get outta this joint
cuz my frees will put him way below, his own melting point
good opener, freez
the Key is you suck, ill run Motor city and Drive em
cuz im Pis(t)sin on this dude, you aint good stop Lion
get the concept, not hitten
funny how you embarass ya self, i guess you can say you have one skill
but hes just Plain, thats why hes ridin First Class to wackville
punch over here, n with the personal
you know you dont gain from battlin noobs, for example your self
so Read that Line from schiz' Book, maybe youll even get off the Shelf
lil wack 2 me, nothin hitten
he aint got a Strong Line, but yet he hangin off me like a Rope
when i put ya name in my verse...
...thats the only time you looked dope
lol like the closer
better verse then mels if you ask me. had wordplays that were ok, nice punches in there. u went straight at the dude man. personals i liked and creativity with better vocabs. i just think u should work on ur structure more. don't like strached out lines 2 much iight. pretty good battle but ma vote goes 2 Two.
v/TTT
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