Due wensday by 12:00
No BS vote
VOTE COUNT AT 500
No crew votes...
10-12 lines...
GO
Due wensday by 12:00
No BS vote
VOTE COUNT AT 500
No crew votes...
10-12 lines...
GO
Checking in, 10 lines
Your crew is dead now
checking in coll 10 lines and thanks for the forum
Master Of Illusion
Intractional Actions
Open Mics
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
New OM
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
GFX Battle-
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
you say Soul Taking Mafia is nothing but a herb crew
so how does it feel to get your forum taking right from under you
so I guess now you going to say STM is a herb this and they D/R that
but losing this battle and not going no where wit rap thats where you at
you ain't shit...thats why you stuck here with nothing in your pocket
any ? about this being a punch well I guess I gotta rip his head outta da socket
y'all can rate this simplisty or by complexity...it doesn't matter to me
yo but if I see him on the streets I'll show him exactly how to be a G
I'll write this for now but i'll say it to his face later...FUCK YOU BITCH
and if got anything to say there's a whole lot of desert to dig you a trench
y'all done for good now
Master Of Illusion
Intractional Actions
Open Mics
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
New OM
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
GFX Battle-
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Wow, thanks for wasting my time herb, you suck, this was keyed up in a few minutes. I don't think I've ever spent such a little amount of time on a verse. And spell my name right in your sig fag.
Your a just big talkin' bitch, but you ain't nothing but shit
This dumb fag has to read signs to figure out what gifted is
You ain't nothing but piss n' ya puches are missin' ya herb
Cuz I NEVER seen a fag whose dope who has to bold his words
Your a hideous terd n' damn dawg ya define wackness
Bitch the only six pack you got is held together with plastic
But the truth is I wrote that last bar awhile ago whore
See I couldn't find an opponent wack enough to post it for
Clown I'm starin at ya corpse, ya crew's wack we agree
But STM's in a league of it's own.........40,000 under the sea
Uppin 4 votes
Master Of Illusion
Intractional Actions
Open Mics
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
New OM
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
GFX Battle-
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
I'll write this for now but i'll say it to his face later...FUCK YOU BITCH
and if got anything to say there's a whole lot of desert to dig you a trench
vs
Your a just big talkin' bitch, but you ain't nothing but shit
This dumb fag has to read signs to figure out what gifted is
You ain't nothing but piss n' ya puches are missin' ya herb
Cuz I NEVER seen a fag whose dope who has to bold his words
Your a hideous terd n' damn dawg ya define wackness
Bitch the only six pack you got is held together with plastic
But the truth is I wrote that last bar awhile ago whore
See I couldn't find an opponent wack enough to post it for
Clown I'm starin at ya corpse, ya crew's wack we agree
But STM's in a league of it's own.........40,000 under the sea
gifted - you came pretty weak with your verse, not many hard hitting punchlines at all. you need to get more personal and use more wordplay and metas. good structure and flow though. ive seen better from you.
dth - near all your verse had good punchlines. good flow and structure too, no stretched bars or nuttin. good wordplay. better use of vocab would make it better.
v/dth - more punchlines, better verse all round.
please drop a vote on my battle, thank you.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=218756&page=1
Uppin #1
DaTrusHurtz
You ain't nothing but piss n' ya puches are missin' ya herb
Cuz I NEVER seen a fag whose dope who has to bold his words
Your a hideous terd n' damn dawg ya define wackness
Bitch the only six pack you got is held together with plastic
But the truth is I wrote that last bar awhile ago whore
See I couldn't find an opponent wack enough to post it for
Clown I'm starin at ya corpse, ya crew's wack we agree
But STM's in a league of it's own.........40,000 under the sea
Good key dude, the 8th and last line killed it, funny shit
vs
Gifted Signs
nothing
You did'nt seem to punch or anything, just went on about how somebody was going to call your crew a bunch of herbs, try dissing next time, no hate
v/DaTrus...... much better verse in my eyes, more punches and other obvious reasons
huh
you say Soul Taking Mafia is nothing but a herb crew
so how does it feel to get your forum taking right from under you
-weak personal...no effect
so I guess now you going to say STM is a herb this and they D/R that
but losing this battle and not going no where wit rap thats where you at
-blah blah more filler...punch...shit was more like a scratch
you ain't shit...thats why you stuck here with nothing in your pocket
any ? about this being a punch well I guess I gotta rip his head outta da socket
-more filler
y'all can rate this simplisty or by complexity...it doesn't matter to me
yo but if I see him on the streets I'll show him exactly how to be a G
-lame
I'll write this for now but i'll say it to his face later...FUCK YOU BITCH
and if got anything to say there's a whole lot of desert to dig you a trench
-blah
Gifted this is text...u gotta use wordplay, metas, multis and shit like that or u gonna get beat every time...that shit was so fuckin basic....but elevate and try to use punches
Bitch the only six pack you got is held together with plastic
But the truth is I wrote that last bar awhile ago whore
See I couldn't find an opponent wack enough to post it for
Clown I'm starin at ya corpse, ya crew's wack we agree
But STM's in a league of it's own.........40,000 under the sea
this killed Gifted verse wit no problem...especially that wack line...that shit made me giggle...lol...
vote=Dth
oh yeah....vote on my battle please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=223444
Wow, thanks for wasting my time herb, you suck, this was keyed up in a few minutes. I don't think I've ever spent such a little amount of time on a verse. And spell my name right in your sig fag.
Your a just big talkin' bitch, but you ain't nothing but shit
This dumb fag has to read signs to figure out what gifted is
not bad
You ain't nothing but piss n' ya puches are missin' ya herb
Cuz I NEVER seen a fag whose dope who has to bold his words
no, i do it too
Your a hideous terd n' damn dawg ya define wackness
Bitch the only six pack you got is held together with plastic
o well not bad
But the truth is I wrote that last bar awhile ago whore
See I couldn't find an opponent wack enough to post it for
decent punch
Clown I'm starin at ya corpse, ya crew's wack we agree
But STM's in a league of it's own.........40,000 under the sea
Not bad closer
Overall:mmmmhhh...just a 6.0
VS.
you say Soul Taking Mafia is nothing but a herb crew
so how does it feel to get your forum taking right from under you
Decent punch
so I guess now you going to say STM is a herb this and they D/R that
but losing this battle and not going no where wit rap thats where you at
not bad
you ain't shit...thats why you stuck here with nothing in your pocket
any ? about this being a punch well I guess I gotta rip his head outta da socket
nah
y'all can rate this simplisty or by complexity...it doesn't matter to me
yo but if I see him on the streets I'll show him exactly how to be a G
not bad
I'll write this for now but i'll say it to his face later...FUCK YOU BITCH
and if got anything to say there's a whole lot of desert to dig you a trench
not bad
y'all done for good now
Overall:uhhh...6.1
This battle was beefin really ; so if i vote on that level i say Gift'd cuz the other nigga was jus tryna express his opinion of how wack the other rapper was with NO wordplay and Gift'd was just tellin him wat he'd do and a few wordplay punches...so i give it to Gift'd...the other guiy needs to elevate and better rephrase sum shit, and b more specific WITH WORDPLAY next time cuz ur styles arent good...
V/Gifted Signs
*The Original.*
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
datruhurtz had alot of punches but some were statements and alot of gay shit...
u called him a herb more then once a lil to repeatitive... u r structure was nice to
gifted u came hard with punches more creative in my eyes it wasnt as repeatitive
and they hit witha constitent flow..u didnt use played lines or that much of played subjects..
good battle but i have to say datruhurtz had nice punches but a lil played in my eyes..
i vote gifted for slightly betta verse...
Let The Pen Bleed So My Wrists Don't
Death does not concern us, because as long as we exist, death is not here. And when it does come, we no longer exist
uppin #2
Master Of Illusion
Intractional Actions
Open Mics
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
New OM
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
GFX Battle-
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Uppin #2 for non-newbs to vote on this
Posting Rules
