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  1. August 12th, 2005, 12:42 AM #1
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    -God has a Gun-

    Some say in a metaphoric phrase,God's got a Gun
    and hes aimin for tha sun,praise and amen,men gotta run
    hide theyselves when they shelves begin to shake
    mountains shift,tha oceans lift as tha moon begins to break
    scaled eight earthquake,seems its the apocalypse
    god has just been droppin tips,and so what if a comet hits
    hes on goldenstreets with a cannon,just to examine
    how tha sins of man can escape gods plannin,hes demandin
    to know what evil has beseached his people,too lethal
    to ingest by men but decietful,women in crumbled steeples
    sins more serious than mens,offend what thee defends
    force depends on trends of troops,its God they will commend
    who needs it more,bring death to what you cant perfect
    tha dialect suggests,if were less than best,our deaths progress
    when your made in an image never seen,whats tha vintage
    how perfect can we be,from an image we cant see,so were a percentage


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  2. August 12th, 2005, 12:45 AM #2
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    #1
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=221473


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  3. August 12th, 2005, 12:46 AM #3
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    dis was a clean drop....vocab was tight...imagery was there....structure was nicely done.... all around i think..... 8.5/10

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  4. August 12th, 2005, 12:47 AM #4
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    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=221164


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  5. August 12th, 2005, 12:50 AM #5
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    shits fire!! on some other shit, like ive always loved your shit as poetry, but this finaly dragged me into your rap skill. Like you jus hit that bulls eye on half poetry and half rap, vocab and content on that tip and honestly your flow and multis have finally caught my eye on some personal shit that I be thinkin about, cause notta lotta dudes MC's round here no more, jus 'rappers', you on some real MC should be how it was back in the day be, O.S. = Old School baby, keep it up, ima watch your drops, you got my most respect on this site, stay up -1-
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  6. August 12th, 2005, 12:51 AM #6
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    fuck that at least a 9 but can push a 10/10, know the truth
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  7. August 12th, 2005, 01:07 AM #7
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    word...i appreciate it...up.


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  8. August 12th, 2005, 02:10 AM #8
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  9. August 12th, 2005, 06:18 AM #9
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    This piece was tight as fuck a good read.
    i enjoyed it more because you included the right amount of mullties in it your vocabulary was spot on too, and the flow of it was perfect.
    Do you do audio aswell as text? because i think you'd make a good audio head if you have a good enough delivery.
    Anyway this was a good piece to read and im looking forward to reading more of your pieces, keep dropping them

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  10. August 12th, 2005, 07:09 AM #10
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    Dayum this shite iz hottt!!!rhymes is crazy tite assed
    shudda been longer tho mayne this ain enuff for me its jus a wind up. yo shudda got me up in there ,.. ha ha

    crazy rhymes fosho

    uppin the verse 2 from u
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  11. August 12th, 2005, 08:47 AM #11
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    to know what evil has beseached his people,too lethal
    to ingest by men but decietful,women in crumbled steeples
    ^ My favorite bar, you had good multies and good vocab in this drop. It was a good length to me, I didnt get bored wit it.
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  12. August 12th, 2005, 08:58 AM #12
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    nice drop.... good flow and structure...............
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  13. August 12th, 2005, 12:02 PM #13
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    i appreciate it....up.


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  14. August 12th, 2005, 12:14 PM #14
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    yo that shit was a mind blower i cant even comprehend half the world play let alone say it myself 11/10 extra point for being too complex for me =P
    EvOLuTioN iz fo Da BesT

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    "I'm not cocky, I'm confident
    So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment    "
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    I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
    Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
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  15. August 12th, 2005, 12:18 PM #15
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    That was good piece you got there.Everything flowed good.You had good multies.Your structure was ok,you could've made the font a little bigger in my opinion.Your vocabulary was weak in the beginning but then you started to use more complex words after every bar.This topic did work for you because you really did make this a good piece.I'd give two thumbs up
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