Okay now this might not be very good but it's my first so please give some constructive criticism. This is about a true story about a girl I know. The name was changed to protect her identity:
Now before I begin this tale listen to this warning
This has extreme detail about death and mourning
It’s about a Columbian girl her name was Donna
Father was gone somewhere smoking marijuana
Now don’t laugh no more because this ain’t funny
Momma had to be a whore to get daughter some money
Mama mixed up with a money-hungry snotty foo’
He made little Donna start to give off her body too
One day an officer was cruising around the block
Found Donna raped and beaten laying on the sidewalk
He drove around with Donna on a mommy search
Couldn’t find her so he took Donna to a local church
Orphanage tried to find her a new mommy to love
All of a sudden mom’s man walked with black gloves
He was drunk and looking for his little money maker
The church hid Donna under the bed so he couldn’t take her
He was taken away by a cop finally the man was stopped
And next a woman from USA called looking to adopt
Now this might sound like the perfect happy ending
But the problem continued ascending
See her life seem so screwed up that at sixteen she tried
To get her own car blew up and commit suicide
Now she is twenty and still got plenty of issues she need to deal
But now she got a home and she ain’t alone and can afford a meal