"When the Sky Fell i was in captivity,limited memory
infinite similies,and my mind confines my sensorys"
(Nice Line)
shit had a consistant flow, with some well placed multis, and stayed on topic like a pro
goo pimpin, pimpin.
REAL NICE PIECE
7.2/10
HOLLA BACk
7.2..lmfao..thnks though..up.
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7.2.... hardly a score. this is above that. the flow and multis kill your eyes as you read. This was DYNOMITE!! Good job keep droppin. .Reign.
appreciate it..up.
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multies are also kider sick
and the internal rhyming was on point like a mofuka..
this piece packs deepness
it apperars like a tombstone for the earth
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thnks...up,
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there is not really much you can say bad about dis piece, I can't think of anything actually...the flow, vocab., superb and the topic was original...I like pieces like these...ones that make you really think...creativity was very much evident and the message was great...
Look out for my 3 part OM...comin sooner than you think
thnks..up.~1~
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great imagery, very poetic, your use of mutlis is good and at the same time its very punctual, at times the complexity drives away from importance communication, but it doesn't take away from the peice, it jus depends on what the extent of the readers vocab and comprehension is . . . good work, keep up, -1-
Nice piece right here...
The title for one drew my attention and the topic you used was interesting, had a sort of dark yet truthful feel over it you know. The vocab was excellent, you had a nice level of complexity but did not overdo it though. The flow was impeccable, internals blended in so easily, everything was very smooth and the whole piece has a good rhythm to it. The imagery was amazing, I could picture everything happening as if I was in the middle of it all and you managed to combine it with strong emotion!
Keep it up...
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Odi et Amo
Queen of Mondo Thugs
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i appreciate it....up.
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that's was tight man. nice multis and shit peep the rest of my OM's
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whoa homie...............Dope piece in my opinion, loved the whole thing about this piece, the vocab was real nice..not simple but not too brainy either. the structure was easily readable and the rhyme was smooth, rolled off my tongue when i was readin it. overall this was a dope drop and really hope to read more. Thnx for the feedabck on my drop too. keep flowin
Be EaZy
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