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    living dead

    yo, this is like rap/poem kinda thing right here. didnt know where to post it so i left it here.. kinda short

    its so hard ta see clear when ur born blind to the light
    ive scourned my life, torn my pride but kept my eyes on the prize//
    the stars look like her eyes in the sky, its a lonely face in the dark
    my only wish is she'd here my cries and fullfill her place in my heart//
    envaded my part i jus chased and pursued ya dreams
    couldnt hand ya none of 'em, i gave ya love tho an every beautifull thing i seen/

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    TreaZoN sILLable's Avatar
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    more poetic..you should have dropped it in poetic scriptures..but its too short and you dont have two links o two replys..keep elevatin ~1~


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    Nah not long enough really and as he said no links but part from tha it was ite,bit short but i didnt mind the piece to much,fort so of the detail was quite kl

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    elevate...all im gonna say homie

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    Diz was an ok drop but u have room 4 quite some elavation. Up da vocab a lil bit and your wordplay. Keep droppin and elevatin. RTF on da OM links in my sig.

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